Blunt Reviews

❄️Dear Mocha❄️

Creativity:15 /15

The way that this author does this is so out of the box. Amazing and creative. Let me tell you how creative it is, she. Makes cats that can turn into humans, but. There's a whole world. They're just dedicated to cats; humans are not supposed to be in that world. The creativity that went into this had to have just been outstanding.

Originality:15 /15

This is definitely a story that I've not read. The way that the story is is something that I like. Not expecting. It's so different. Like don't get me wrong, I have watched anime that dealt with like cats and spiritual worlds, but I've never read a story about it. So, for me, this was so refreshing, and the story's originality was just on point.

Storytelling:15 /15

I feel the story's all over the place, and it's not bad. I say it's all over the place because I don't feel it starts in one place. As you can tell, it starts off with Mochas family, but I also feel like it goes through, and you can. See life and adventure through the cats' eyes, too. That's why I said it's all over the place; it's not just focused on one character. It's focused on many characters, and I respect the author for that.

Character:15 /15

It's really enjoyed the characters. You can tell that they grow with each chapter, the challenges that they go through, and the adventures that they have. They're going through the adventure, and I feel like they're trying to find who they are. At the same time, dealing with the magical aspect of everything and know that their world will never be the same. So, for me, the growth with every chapter is definitely there when it comes to each character.

Story Flows: 15/15

The reason I still give this author. 15 points because the author mentioned that this is a first draft and that there are grammatical and structural errors. Had they not mentioned it, they would have docked points for them. But in the story, before you even start, the author mentions that there will be grammar errors. There are going to be structural errors. This story is not edited. So, my docking them points for this is irrelevant. There's no reason to. Because they had already stated that this story is not where it needs to be, that being said, they are correct. This story needs a lot of editing. But it was still an enjoyable story regardless of what needed to be done.

Cover Design: 15/15

The cover is beautiful and represents the story very well.

Final Thoughts:10 /10

At the end of the day, the author has a really good and unique story, and the story is one of those stories that I enjoyed. I enjoyed the world that they have created. I enjoyed the story. I enjoyed the development. I respect that each character is developing well and has room to grow. I respect everything the author has done for the story because, at the end of the day, if I'm reading a story and do not see a character's growth, then then. That shows that there's not a lot of growth when it comes to the author. But I can honestly say that there is so much growth with these characters and how this author writes this story that they should be very proud of their story. It was a refreshing story to read because I haven't read a story that makes me think, wow, this is such new and unique work. This story did that. It's so unique. It's so refreshing. It's so new, and it's so beautiful. So, the authors need to pat themselves on the back and appreciate what they've done because they've created a beautiful world that I would love to be a part of. It's a world that the characters that I've created would enjoy visiting.

Chapters I read:3

Total points:100

Summary of the book:

Meet Mocha Misaki, an ordinary teenager who seems to have a knack for bad luck. One day, while attempting a dare from a friend, she stumbles upon a mysterious portal. This gateway transports her into a fantasy world, where magic, mythical creatures, and epic adventures await.As Mocha embarks on her journey, she encounters challenges, makes unlikely allies, and unravels secrets that could change the fate of both her world and the fantastical realm she now inhabits. With each arc, the stakes rise, and Mocha's courage is put to the test.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------Witches, Wizards, Guardians, ghosts, citizens, all hear me out! This book is still ongoing! Our story is almost done!

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