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Creativity:15 /15

Where has this author been my whole life? I need to know because this author wrote this story, and how they did the characters has me smiling. I love. their main character. She is lovely, and their creativity with this story is a chef's kiss.


Originality:15 /15

I don't think I've read anything so breathtaking and so different than this story, and this type of story is very breathtaking because it's different. It's original. It has its own little flair to it. I love. that story. I love the way that the author wrote this story. I am just in awe because the way that the author did this story, every character has such a beautiful personality Oh, I love this story.


Storytelling:15 /15

Now, when it comes to the story, Tony part, this is gonna sound very weird, and I don't want the author to feel like this is a shot or rude to their story because it's not. This is just how I saw the story and how I saw it as storytelling. I felt like I was a peasant I felt like I was a peasant watching a love story or a could be love story form. The way that the story is and the way that they tell the story, I feel like I'm one of the peasants walking around waiting to see what happens between these two lovebirds, knowing that the main character, the girl, has such character to her. And that the oil is going to have his hands full, but. Laughing because I know that if everything is as it should be, it will. Be a perfect ceremony or matrimony.


Character: 15/15

I love these characters. Love the way that's awesome. These characters. They are such unique characters and have such personality with them. I could not help but love them, but I also felt the respect and the. Loyalty that the girl has for her family like her promise or the way that she talks about her brothers and how her twin would not get married unless she got married. Even though I don't think that's the whole story. But her loyalty, the way she holds herself, and how she won't get married unless she feels it's right for her. Oh my God, these characters. And then I'm on top of that. The royal. He was phenomenal. The way that he was able to talk to her and not. Be recognized as who he was


Story Flows:15 /15

When it came to the story, there were no sentence structure sentence.. flow, or grammar errors.


Cover Design: 15/15

now, Hear me out. I'm not saying that I hate to cover because I don't. I love the cover. It's so simple but elegant. Do I wish there was like a shadow behind the girl of a man? Yes. I do, but for. What it's worth. That is just me and what I would prefer to see in the story or the cover. That is my preference, regardless. Regardless, the cover is lovely and matches the story and the elegance of Tenfold.


Final Thoughts:10 /10

I want to know why this author is not well known. Why does this author not have tons and tons and thousands and millions and billions of votes of comments of whatever you have to do to get this noticed? Like, why does this author not have awards? Why is this author not popular? Because let me tell you, I'm. Speechless, and that takes a lot. I am breathless by how beautiful this story is, how detailed it is, yet how elegant it is. I have never used the word elegant when it comes to writing, but this author has a way of elegancy, even if that's a word. I'm not sure. When it comes to this story, and let me tell you, they do not disappoint. They are on point from the beginning to the three chapters that I read. And if it weren't so late, I'd probably read more. But this girl got a life anyway. Going back to this review, I feel like I am honored that this author let me read their story and that they rated patiently to let me review their story. Let me tell you, this author has been rating that good two months for this review, and I am doing it. My best to get the reviews done. But this author did wait patiently, and I am glad that they waited patiently for me to review this story because, let me tell you, this story deserves a Nobel Prize. This story needs to be the best seller awards. If there is such a thing, this author needs to be going like, hey, I'm better than JK Rowling. Take that because let me tell you. I would sit down with this cup of tea. In this book, I devour it like my life depended on it. I am one of those very brutally honest people. And you know that I will say things, and I do not mean it as a sexual thing. I do not mean it as, Oh my God, this girl's creepy. These are my thoughts, and you should take us as a compliment. Because let me tell you, I would devour this book and then beg for the author to make another book or a sequel to this book. So I could continue to devour more of this creator's writing. Let me tell you, readers, whoever reads these reviews. I know a lot of you guys do. This author is one of those authors that you need to follow and wait patiently to see what magnificent work they will come up with next. And as you said, they're waiting for their brilliant work to come out, which it will. You need to find other work that they have written or are writing and be like let me dive into this book right now while you're writing these other books. Because I need to know what other magnificent worlds you have created that I do not know about because I'm over here like, Oh my goodness. How has this author not been recognized for their pure talent? How has this author not been in like Wattys? Have Some Money answered questions when it comes to this author and whether they write, how come you are not popular, sweetheart? How come you have not gotten a word for this story? How come you have not entered this story in for a word? Some authors do less than you have done, and they have awards they are winning. At the end of the day, I can say all of this, and you have not entered awards, sweetheart. Why not? Because let me tell you, if I had awards going on and you entered that book, you get first prize. Every single time that. Is just how phenomenal your work is. And I am very sorry that it is not getting the acknowledgment that it deserves. I am sorry that it is not getting the praise it should be. This book is like that very fine chocolate that you have to pay thousands of dollars to get one piece up. And after you spend thousands of dollars on that one piece, you wish that you had more money so you could get another piece because it is that damn good. And that is my review. Thank you. I am honored that you let me read your story. Keep up the hard work, and do not let anybody break your spirits, sweetheart. Because let me tell you the way. You write how elegant your story is and how brilliant you make your characters. Don't let anybody tell you that you are not a phenomenal writer because they would be wrong. And that's facts.


Chapters I read:3


Total points:100


Summary of the book:

A tale of love between a Hindu girl and The Emperor Jalaluddin Mohammad Akbar***Shehenshah was always proud of his wives. The women were tactful, intelligent and beautiful. His haram was filled with numerous such ladies, who were swoon worthy, but only had eyes for him. But there's always something about people who don't let adversity change their hearts. The strength it takes to remain naive, to remain un-blemished by the cruelty of the world, only a few possess it. The Shahenshah too, couldn't overlook such a strength. Such a miracle of a woman, he couldn't stop himself from loving her with all of his heart. His heart, which he had assumed to have died years ago, suddenly started beating the day he met his Noor.***Disclaimers:1. This is FICTION. The protagonist is not a real person in history.2. I am Hindu so I will try not to write much Muslim rituals as it may be wrong. But still if there's something wrong, please do forgive. (Even for my Hindu people, I am not religious, so rituals may look a bit weird)3. I don't want to glorify any King/Emperor. This is just a cute idea I came up with.

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