Hey.
We got a problem here.
Now that I really think about it, this story has kind of lost its premise. Sort of. Especially with its title, Just the Pizza Guy. When, in fact, he was the Pizza Guy for less than 10 chapters.
I admit, I kind of drifted into the battle shonen-esque type of story here, as you can see very, very clearly. Not that it's a bad thing, but I felt it should have been more, could have been more. It just feels like I just put a character into the main plot and plopped him in giving him a power to the boot. Leaning more towards shit like JJK. Like I said, not that it's bad, but it just feels kind of generic.
From the former vigilante to the pizza shop restauranteur to hero? In under 20 chapters? I dunno, but it seems a little rushed. Is it? With long chapters? Not sure.
What should I do? Keep going, just rebrand it? Discontinue? Rewrite? I don't know, but expect the worst.
Am I proud of this? I guess. It's my second story in the making from an absolute amateur in writing, so I guess I did okay.
I dunno, lots to think about.
Let me know if any of your suggestions please.
With the best of regards,
Truth
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In My Steed (OC x MHA)
Fanfiction(Formerly known as Just the Pizza Guy) (Cover isn't by me) The past never leaves you. Jason Mendoza is forced to accept this thought as he is thrust into the world of heroism and villainy by powers greater than he is, in exchange for a dull taste of...
