Add a Sentence to the Story!

The title is self exlpanatory. Don't be afraid to be creative! Here's the first sentence:

I took a deep breath as I looked out over the glassy blue sea, and something stirred behind me.

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Jonah had woken up, much to my relief.

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I hurried over to him as he sat up and said "Fae? What's going on?"

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"You passed out," I told him. "How are you feeling?"

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"Like utter shit," he murmured, laying back down on the makeshift bed I'd made for him from an old blanket and my backpack as a pillow.

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"we need to move fast or they'll catch us," I said, "just move as fast as you can go and if you need a rest we will stop, i'll be with you the whole time."

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I tugged on his hand but he moaned "Just let me go back to sleep, Fae, I feel like death."

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"If we don't keep moving you WILL be dead." I grabbed him by the shoulders and forced him up but he shoved me away, dropping back down and pulling the frayed blanket over his head.

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"Fine, I'll leave you. And I'm not joking," I said, pulling my backpack out from under his head.

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He groaned as his head smacked against the unforgiving earth.

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He let out a small grumble as I walked away, deliberately making my footsteps as loud as possible until finally he yelled out after me.

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"Wait!" he screamed.

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I stopped and turned around, watching him rise clumsily to his feet and swearing under his breath.

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"You know, I hate you sometimes." He murmured, as he matched my step.

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"You wouldn't be saying that if you were dead!" I exclaimed, "Obviously."

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"I know," he breathed, smiling a bit.

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We walked away from the sandy dunes of the beach and towards the forest.

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Fear of losing Jonah, which I had for long inarticulate, made me put on my armor of protectiveness for him.

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Hey guys. I've moved this to here:

http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/367570/Add+a+Sentence+to+the+Story%21+

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WRONG LINK. It's actually here:

http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/367570/add-a-sentence-to-the-story/#Item_1

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