Ok, so I'm thinking about a description that grips the reader, what about something like, "The vacation with her crazy alcohol- obsessed sister started off on the wrong foot for Mya, and only gets worse from there. When she is attacked by robbers, she never thought that her savior might just be worse than the scum that stole from her." Does that sound good? Do you think that's enticing enough, I really want people to like this thing... Ok, I'll continue then. "Mya Navaro is about to find out that the bedtime stories and folk lore had everything wrong; and she had the chance to set the record straight. But would she even want to after she learns the secrets of the fairy tales she grew up hearing?" Yeah; I like that one a lot. That about sums this up. I'll post it now. -Mya N.-