so... this is the beginning of a book I'm writing that still doesn't have a title but atm I'm calling it "You and I and Mae". It's going to be slight thriller and mistery, romance and parts of just poetry. please tell me if you like it or not and how to improve it thank you so much for reading -Zoe aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i'm nervous!!! okay okay first time actually posting something I've writen on the internet I can do this