When Jade had first met Josie, she was a wayward flame. Now, as the conflagration dies down to embers, the only remnants of the person Josie used to be lies in the ashes at her feet.
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Josie's transformation through Jade's eyes.
When Jade had first met Josie, she was a wayward flame. Now, as the conflagration dies down to embers, the only remnants of the person Josie used to be lies in the ashes at her feet.
or
Josie's transformation through Jade's eyes.