This book is a collection of short stories. I have been trying to write a long story (a really long one), but I guess my jumpy brain just wants to try out new things first. These are my trial writings, to explore the way i write, to learn to write various scenarios (like they say, the more you write, the better you become at writing). I want to get real feedback on the way i write, to be able to write better. This whole collection is mainly to help me improve my writing. I request the readers to comment on the aspects of the stories that were interesting and also the ones that felt like a drag or completely redundant; grammar, structure, etc. It would be really helpful if the feedback is specific, even otherwise i would love to read your thoughts on the stories. I also post on my wordpress account (which has poems and other musings apart from the short stories) - if you are interested - https://phyarpoe.wordpress.com/ Thank you!
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