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❄️Feverish Revenge❄️

Creativity: 15/15
When it comes to the creativity of everything, I do feel like they are very creative with the story. I don't want to say that it's like 100% creativity because it is a unique way of doing things. It's still kind of a story I've read before, but it's still interesting.

Originality:10 /15
Honestly, I don't know if it's an original story. It's another Mafia story, and Mafia stories tend to blend in together. I'm not saying that it's not a good story because it is an interesting one, but to me, it's a familiar one. I've heard it, read it, and understand it. So, at the end of the day, even though it is a fascinating story, it's not an original story.

Storytelling:15 /15
I feel like the storytelling is there. It's a very good storytelling. But again, it's a story about the mafia and somebody going undercover to get Revenge for God knows what. In this case, I feel like the Revenge was for her mother because somebody killed her mother. I'm not saying that it's not a good story. I will never tell you not to continue writing, but for me, it's a story I've read in the past. And it's so similar to stories I've read. It's still a good story.

Character: 15/15
I do feel like the character development is there. You can see her anger towards the mafia that she's in right now. Because she is Undercover, you can see that she wants to defeat all of them and get Revenge for her mother's death. It's a very good story.

Story Flows:15 /15
I feel like the story flows very well. I love the way that the story flows. It beautifully flows, and nothing's wrong with it. Nothing's out of place. The stories are excellent.

Cover Design: 5/15
I feel like the wording takes away from the cover, like the covers in the back and the words up front, but the terms are too bold and don't blend in well with the cover. So you get lost in the words and the title, and you can't see the beauty of the cover. To me, they don't work at all. The cover and the font are not beautiful together, and because of that, they don't work.

Final Thoughts: 10/10
I feel like the story has a lot of potential, and it's a perfect story. When reading it, it had much growth to continue with the characters. It had many emotions and many ups and downs, and I like that about a story. I feel it is not an original story because I've read Mafia stories before, but it's still a really good story.

Chapters I read: prologue and first chapter turn up the tree

Total points: 85

Summary of the book:

Sophie Deni unraveled the Mafia's inner workings and made a lasting impression with ease. Little did she know, this merely scratched the surface of her journey. More challenges like love and revenge await, and they would not be so forgiving. *****Sophie Deni fights to get revenge for her mother's death by taking over the Mafia. She works with Francis Vino, who already has plans to kill his father, the leader of the Mafia. To survive, Sophie is forced to work with Antonio Vino, the heir to the Mafia, who threatens to reveal information he shouldn't know, and ruin Sophie's life.With every move Sophie makes, she finds herself dancing with danger, the lives of those she holds dear and her very existence hangs in the balance. Truths unravel, loyalties are tested, and a love like no other emerges amidst the chaos.

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