ZindAgi

By tanzila_tuly03

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It's based on a real story.. It's a sweet teenager love story. Zindagi is the journey of Avneil's life where... More

ZindAgi I

ZindAagi II

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By tanzila_tuly03

Happy birthday writer sahiba & soon to be Ms Doctor. Always keep smiling & be happy. mk_happysoul

Please ignore mistakes 🙏 & enjoy reading.

Neil breaks the hug.

Neil: what?

Avni: yes Neil I don't want to be your girlfriend. I want to be your life partner your soulmate your lifeline as you are my lifeline. I want to spend my whole life with you.

Neil again hugs her.

Neil: you scared me. Avni please don't do like this again.. Aise shock maat diya karo mein maar jaunga tumhari bina.

Avni: Neil please aisi baat maat karo aj humari life ka itna special day hai.

Neil: special toh hai. Accha suno Avni mujhe tumse or bhi kuch bolna hai.

Avni: kya Neil?

Neil: Avni mein nahi chahta ki sab ko humari bareme pata chale. Jada se jada hum Ali or Riya ko batayenge. Or kisi ko nahi. Or Hum pehle jeise milte the aise milenge taki kisi ko doubt na ho. OK?

Avni: ok.

Neil: ok now let's go inside program start ho gaya hoga.

Avni: yup let's go.

Their relationship going smoothly now they just completed their in 12th class. still they are maintaining secret relationships. No one even doubts on them. Everything was going great.

One day

Avni: Neil tum he yaad hai na mere 18th birthday aa rahi hai..

Neil: accha kab hai tumhari birthday?

Avni: (playfully hits him on his shoulder) Neilll

Neil: ok ok mujhe yaad hai, meri jaan ka birthday mein kaise bhul sakta hu.

Avni: Neil mere birthday mein tumhare saath celebrate karna chahti hu.

Neil: hum karenge na. Hum tumhara birthday saath me hi celebrate karenge. Morning se afternoon tak hum saath me hi rahenge.

Avni: Neil mujhe mere birthday wale din tumhare saath sunset dekhna hai. Or pura din ghumna hai.

Neil: Avni woh sab thik hai but tumhari family evening tak tumhe bahar rehne dega woh bhi tumhari birthday wale din.

Avni: mein bol dungi mere friends birthday party chahte hai toh hum sab bahar party karenge.

Neil: are you sure..?

Avni: ten thousand percent.

Neil: ok then hum tumhari birthday ki din pura din ghumenge or evening ko beach pe sunset dekh ne jayenge.

Avni: I love you Neil (hugging her)

Neil: I love you too meri jaan.

In Avni's birthday..

They enjoy whole day with each other. Before sunset they come to a beach..they walk on the beach sometime holding each other hands

then sit there.

Avni rest her head on his shoulder

Avni: kitna accha nazara hai na I wish yhe pal yhe hi tham jaye..

Neil: r e agar yhe pal yaha tham gaya toh humari shadi kaise hogi or football team kaise aaye ga.

Avni hits Neil on his chest.

Neil: aauuucchhhh Avni.

They smile. After some time sitting there

Neil: Avni ab humein chal na chahiye. Chalo mein tumhe Riya ki ghar chor deta hu.

Avni: thodi der aise hi raho na. Pata nahi kio aj tumse door jane ka maan nahi man raha hai. Lag raha hai bus tumhare saath hi rahu.

Neil: Avni aise hi late ho gayi hai ab humein chalna chahiye.

Avni: but Neil

Neil: hum kal phir milenge na. Ab chalo get up.

Neil gets up but Avni holds his hand. Neil looks at her.

Avni: hum milenge na Neil.

Neil: or kya hum zaroor milenge. Ab chalo.

Avni gets up. They are going to the car.

Avni: Neil

Neil: haa.

Avni: please hug me..

Neil doesn't say anything & just hug her.

Neil: (in mind) pata nahi aisa kio feel ho raha hai ki mein koi kimti chij khone ja raha hu. Avni ko ager bola toh woh or bhi jada sad ho jayegi. God please meri Avni ko safe rakhna hamesha.

After a period of time Neil breaks the hug.

Neil: ab chale?

Avni just nodes & about to sit in the car..

Neil: Avni

Avni: hmmm

Neil: please jaan smile kar do ek baar jane se pehle.

Avni smile but it isn't reaching to her eyes.

Neil: aise nahi.. Mujhe woh smile chahiye jise dekh ke mera dil smile karta hai.

This time Avni smile ful heartily. Soon they reach Riya's house..

From there Avni goes to her house & Neil to his.

Avni enter the house..

Ashish: kaha se aa rahi ho?

Avni gets scared.

Ashish: meine pucha kaha gayi thi? (shout)

Avni: aa ab papa..

Ashish: Avni answer me..

Avni: papa mein Riya ki...

Before she complete Ketan interrupts her.

Ketan: jhut bilkul maat bolna. Meine khud dekha hai tumhe us ladke ke saath.

Neela comes to her.

Neela: baccha koun hai woh ladka?

Avni: aa ma maa woh Neil Khanna hai mera frie...

Again interrupted by Ketan

Ketan: ab yhe maat bolna ki woh tumhari friend hai. Kio ki koi friend aise nahi milte hai. Jaise tum dono..

Neela: daaro maat baccha batao humein..

Avni: maa hum hum ek dusre se pyaar karte hai..

Thuds..

Ashish slaps Avni..

Neela: Ashish..

Ashish: iss ke kamre me le jao iss Neela. ager yhe thodi or der mere samne rahi pata nahi mein kya karunga iss ke saath. Or ek baat aj ki baad tumhari muh se mujhe us ladke ka naam bhi nahi sunai dena chahiye.

Avni: but papa I love him. I can't live without him.

Ashish glare at Avni.

Neela: baccha tum chalo mere saath.

Neela take Avni from there by dragging her.

Ashish: Ketan us ladke ka pata lagao or uske family ki inform kar do ki apne bete ko Avni se dur rakhe.

Ketan gather information & inform Prakash

After hearing Ashish Prakash is shocked. Thankfully bebe wasn't there. He comes to Neil's room.

Prakash: Neil Neil..

Neil: ji dad.

Prakash: tu aj kis ladki ki saath tha.

Neil: da dad..

Prakash: Jo bhi ho mujhe koi farak nahi padta mein bas itna janta hu tu uss ladki se aj ki baad nahi milega.

Neil: dad.. Dad..

Prakash: bhul jao usse. Uski papa ka call aaya tha unhone kaha ki tum unke beti se dur raho. Or tum jante ho bebe kabhi nahi manegi. Issi liye behtar yhe hi hoga ki tum usse bhul jao.

Neil: but dad...

Prakash: I don't know anything. Or tum ek baat sunlo mein bebe ki khilap kabhi nahi ja sakta.

Prakash leave from there..

Neil: Avni ki family ne ager aisa kiya hai toh pata nahi Avni kaisi hogi. God please uski khayal rakhna. Kya karu mein ab..?

2 days passes

Avni couldn't contact with Neil in those two days. Neil is trying his best to contact with her but he failed because Ashish snatched her phone from her.

In the evening

In Mehta house In hall

Ashish: Neela apni beti ko samjha do uss ladke ko bhul jaye.

Neela: Ashish hum aaram se bhi toh baat kar sakte hai na iss bareme..

Ashish: koi baat nahi hogi iss bareme. Or agar nahi mani phir mera friend ka ek beta hai next month uski shadi kar denge apni friend ki bete ki saath.

Neela: Ashish aap pagal ho kya abhi age hi kya hai usski.

Ashish: duniya mein mujhe mera reputation sabse pyaara hai or kuch nahi.

Avni heard everything..

Avni going to her room when she sees her phone on the table of Ashish's room. She takes her phone & go to her room. She locked the door & dials Neil's number

Neil immediately receives the call

Neil: he hello Avni tum tum thik ho..?

Avni: Neil mujhe yaha se le jao Neil please. Mein nahi ji sakti tumhare bina.

Neil: Avni calm down. Sab thik hoga.

Avni: Neil meine abhi suna papa apne friend ki bete ki saath meri shadi karwane wala hai. Neil agar mein tumhara nahi ho sakti toh kisi or ki bhi nahi hungi. Mein apne aap ko khatam kar dungi.

Neil: na na nahi Avni tum aisa kuch nahi karo gi. Mein mein kuch soch ta hu. But you promise you won't think about hurting yourself.

Avni: Neil tum shadi karo gi mujhse karo ge.

Neil: haa Avni you know na how much I love you.

Avni: toh phir aao or mujhe le jao yaha se.

Neil: Avni hum karenge shadi but family ki blessings leke.

Avni: Neil papa nahi manenge please Neil mujhe lejao.

Neil: Avni you you don't worry mein kuch sochta hu. You just remember that we will stay together always. I love you jaan.

Avni: I love you too Ne..

Before Avni can complete she welcomed with a tight slap from her father. The phone falls from Avni's hand but the call is still connected.

Neela: Ashish kya kar rahe hai (Neela hugging Avni)

Ashish: isse samjha do warna pata nahi mein kya kar bethu iss ke saath abhi toh sirf ek slap mara hai.

Ashish leaves from there.. Neil hears everything.

Neil: mein mein meri Avni ko aise nahi chod sakta. Avni mein tumhe or hurt hone nahi de sakta.

Neil calls Ali..

Neil: Ali bhai mujhe teri help chahiye ek.

Ali: bata kya karna hai?

Neil: Ali mein Avni ko woha nahi rehne de sakta. Mein usse lene ja raha hu tu bas shadi ki taiyari karde mein Avni ko leke aata hu.

Ali: ok ho jayega meri pehchan ka ek pondit ji hai mein sab arrange karta hu.

Neil: thank you yaar.

Ali: yhe sab baad me aab ja jaldi Avni ko leke aa ja.

Neil: ok mein rakh ta hu.

They hung up the call.

Soon Neil reach at Avni's room through the balcony..

Avni sees him & hugs her very tightly as if her life depends on it. She is sobbing continuously.

Neil: shhhh tumhara Neil aa gaya hai tumhe lene so no more tears.

Avni: I love you Neil I can't live without you.

Neil: issi liye toh tumhe lene aaya hu hum aj hi shadi karenge.

Avni: sach??

Neil: haa meri jaan. Ab jaldi chalo isse pehle tumhari papa aa jaye.

Avni: ok chalo.

They escape through the balcony.

Other side

Ali is ready with the pandit & all. Soon Neil & Avni reach there.

Neil: pandit ji aap suru kijiye..

Pandit starts reciting mantras..

Pandit: kannadan kon karega?

Hearing it tears escape from her eyes.

Ali: bhai kar sakta hai na pandit ji.

Pandit: haa.

Ali: ok phir mein karunga.

Neil: thanks yaar.

Ali: tu ek saath sara hisab karke phir thanks bol dio.

Neil smiles

Soon their marriage complete. Pandit declared them as husband wife.

Neil hugs Ali.

Ali: meri behen kya khayal rakhna uski aakhon me aashoo nahi aana chahiye. Warna teri khair nahi.

Neil: ok sale shahab.

They smile.

Ali: kal shadi register karna hai mein sab arrange kar diya hai.

Neil: yaar tu nahi hota toh kya hota..

Ali: jada kuch nahi bas tujhe sala nahi milta.

They laugh.

Neil: Ali ab hum chalte hai

Ali: kaha?

Neil: pehle Avni ki ghar jaunga phir bebe se milne..

Ali: but..

Neil: I know woh nahi manenge. Mein bas unhe batane jaunga. Ek try karna toh banta hai Phir bhi agar na maane toh aj ki liye kisi hotel me reh lunga.

Ali: hotel me kio mein hu na. Mere ghar ajana or nanno ko sab pata hai toh unki fikar maat karna. Woh bhi shadi shamil hona chahti thi but unki sister ki health kuch thik nahi thi toh unhe woha jana para.

Neil: it's ok yaar. We will manage.

Ali: jab apna ghar hai to manage karne ki kya zarurat hai.

Neil: ok bhai aa jaunga. Ab chale, Avni?

Avni nodes & they leaves from there.

Avni: Neil mujhe daar lag rahi hai kya humein papa ki pass jana chahiye. I think humein nahi jana chahiye.

Neil: relax Avni mein hu na tumhari sath. Kuch nahi hoga.

Avni: agar papa humein alag karna chaha toh..

Neil: Avni we are married now & adults too. No one can't separate us.

Avni: but agar...

Neil: Avni don't think too much everything will be alright. & I am with you & will be always.

Avni: I love you Neil

Neil: I love you too wifey.

Avni: wifey? (frown)

Neil: yes wifey. We got married so from now you are wifey. Now don't worry & let's go.

They reach Mehta house. Avni presses the bell with trembling hand.

Neela open the door door & shocked to see Avni..

Neela: aa ab Avni baccha tum tum toh apne room me the na.

Then she notice vermillion in her hairline & nuptial chain on her neck. Ashish & Ketan come there hearing Neela.

To be continued...

Thank you everyone for reading
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7th August

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