DEEDAR (On HOLD)

By Samudra_25

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ATTENTION : Regular updates nahi ho payega, as am stuck up with my lyf, family, career and health. So only if... More

MPT Scene | Part - 1
Welcome | Part - 2
Something | Part - 3
Affection โฃ | Part - 4
Observations ๐Ÿ‘€ | Part - 5
Intention...๐Ÿงฉ | Part - 6
SI's misunderstanding | Part - 7
New Case ๐Ÿ—จ | Part - 8
Attention ๐Ÿ‘ | Part - 9
First step to case ๐Ÿฆถ | Part - 10
Lovey - Dovey Bawaal โฃ๐Ÿ’ฅ | Part - 11
Counseling of 'LโคVE' | Part - 12
Misfire...๐Ÿ’ข | Part - 13
Stumbling Block...โ˜„โ˜„ | Part - 14
Defending ๐Ÿ’ซ | Part - 15
Capable of anything....โ‰๏ธ | Part - 16
๐Ÿ”ฅ Hot meeting ๐Ÿ”ฅ | Part - 17
๐Ÿฆนโ€โ™‚๏ธVillainous Hero๐Ÿฆธโ€โ™‚๏ธ | Part - 18
Sidekick ๐Ÿ•ด๐Ÿป | Part - 19
Clash โš’ | Part - 20
Mitwa ๐Ÿ‘ซ๐Ÿป | Part - 21
Wildcard ๐ŸŽด | Part - 22
Miss Lukhnow Competition ๐Ÿฅ | Part - 23
In Distress ๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿ˜ฃ | Part - 24
Bro - Sis Bond ๐Ÿ‘ซ๐Ÿป | Part - 25
Strict Bruvver ๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿปโ€๐Ÿ’ผ | Part - 26
Newfangled Case ๐Ÿ“ | Part - 27
Jhatka ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿป | Part - 28
Beau Idรฉal ๐Ÿค™๐Ÿป | Part - 29
Heartily Confessed ๐Ÿ’— | Part - 30
Fiend ๐Ÿ‘น | Part - 31
Lalla's Happiness โ˜บโ˜บ | Part - 32
Benevolent Staff of MPT ๐Ÿ’Ÿ | Part - 33
Help me...
First Bike ride ๐Ÿ | Part - 34
Gone Astray ๐Ÿ˜Ÿ | Part - 35
Development of Cordialness ๐Ÿงก | Part - 36
Dissociate ๐Ÿ’” | Part - 37
Annoyance ๐Ÿ˜ค | Part - 38
Caring | Part - 39
๐ŸฑKittenish Attitude | Part - 40
Attention & Case Solving | Part - 41
Rudraseena Acquaintance ๐Ÿ’ฎ | Part - 42
Khatta Meetha ๐Ÿ˜› | Part - 43
๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿปโœ… Bhaukaal over jazbaat โฃ | Part - 44
๐Ÿ˜Ÿ Incongruity & Covetousness ๐Ÿ˜– | Part - 45
๐Ÿ’๐Ÿปโ€โ™‚๏ธ Analyzing & Protectiveness ๐Ÿ‘ญ๐Ÿป | Part - 46
๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿ‘ง Pushtosh & Kareena ๐Ÿ‘ญ๐Ÿป | Part - 47
Chee - Rud ๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿ‘ฆ | Part - 48
Miscreant ๐Ÿฆน | Part - 49
Karishma OR Haseena.....??? ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ƒ | Part - 50
Cheetah's Evolution | Part - 51
๐Ÿ˜ˆ Malevolent Knight ๐Ÿฆน๐Ÿปโ€โ™‚๏ธ | Part - 52
๐Ÿ˜ณ๐ŸคฏHelp Help Help ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿคง
๐Ÿ’ž Caring n loving jodi ๐Ÿ’ž | Part - 53
Fun Game
Fun Game 2
Answer me.....
Fun Game
Affixing ๐Ÿ”ง | Part - 55
Switching Attitudes ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿง๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ฆ | Part - 56
Open n Shut Case + Khafa hona | Part - 57
Exercise n case investigation | Part - 58
Qayamat I | Part - 59
Understanding & Misunderstanding | Part - 60
Soreness | Part - 61
Villain who...?? | Part - 62
Couple dance | Part - 63
Dard-e-Sukoon โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿฉน |Part - 64
Nok-Jhok | Part - 65
Chotu & Lambu Didi | Part - 66
'Rafeeq' ๐Ÿซ‚๐Ÿ‘ซ | Part - 67
Quayamat - II | Part - 68
Mistake pari Bhari | Part -69
Jelousy + Psychology | Part - 70
Naya Tante | Part - 71
Motive | Part -72

Santrik | Part - 54

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By Samudra_25

PRECAPE :- Accha iss k pahele humne dekha ki Rudraseena (Rudrik + Haseena) ko DSP k order per case mila hai ek accident ka, woh bhi ek minister k bete ka. Badh mein ussi din Vish k training k liye Rud Karishma Singh ko chunta hai aur uss k reasons bhi woh Haseena Malik ko samjha deta hai. Aur iss samjha dene mein woh log thora kareeb ate hai. Aur yeh kareeb ana unn dono ki dosti ko majboot karta hai. Haseena Malik ka biswas aur bharosha aur bardh raha hai Rudrik k upar. Idher Karishma Singh, ko aishe lagta hai ki Rud uss k Maddam Sir k karib ana chahata hai, aur iss waje se woh Santosh aur Pushpa ji k upar pahele bharak uth ta hai, matlab bharash nikal deti hai. Badh mein Karishma Singh unn k Maddam Sir ko sunata hai lekin, Haseena Malik samjha hi leta hai Karishma Singh ko, k Haseena Malik abhi bhi Karishma Singh k liye hai, aur humesha rahega uss k sath. Aur Rud bass unn k senior hai that's it. Aur koi rishta nahi hai unn logo k beech, aur nahi ek dusre k liye koi alag feelings hai. (Yeh sab baate, Haseena Malik, baate k isharo mein samjhata hai...!! Directly nahi kaheta hai...) Karishma Singh yeh sab sunn k thora thanda hota hai....!! Usse thora rahat milta hai...!! Aur usse wapas lagne laga ki uss k Maddam Sir abhi bhi uss ka hi hai. Aur kisi ka nahi, nahi kabhi hoga. Basically Karishma Singh thora, possessive ho utha tha Haseena Malik ko leh kar....!!

Yeha Vish aur Cheetah k closeness ko dekh k Santu thora bharak jata hai. Badh mein Rud ussi din Cheetah ko training karwata hai. Aur usse sikhata hai ki, agar badalna hai toh khud k liye badle kisi aur k liye nahi. Aur Cheetah k andar yeh change bhi ata hai aur woh Rud k baat k gaherai tak samajh ne ka kosish karta hai, aur thann leta hai ki woh uss gaherai tak jaiyega hi. Khud ko majboot banayega... aur phir jaa k Santu k liye apna payar dikhayega...!!! Aur woh filhal apni duty peh focus karna suru karte hai aur Santu se thora duriya banane ka faishla leta hai...!!!

Yeha raat ko Rud Karishma Singh ko bulwata hai aur pahele daarwata hai, aur hum sab ko pata bhi chalta hai ki Rud Karishma Singh ko blackmail bhi kar raha hai, lekin iss blackmail mein, Rud ka character aur ulajh jata hai...!! Kyun ki woh Karishma Singh k sath flirt karta hai, evil 😈 tone bhi rakhte hai. Aur yeha badh mein woh Karishma Singh se SHO hone k liye taiyari karne ko kaheta hai, aur uss k liye jo jo karna hai woh usse woh sab din ba din batate rahega yeh bhi kaheta hai aur filhal k liye Vish ko train karne k liye bhej deta hai....!!

Aur iss sab k dauran Haseena Malik bhi age gaya tha Rudrishma (Rudrik + Karishma) k beech lekin, Rudrik barehi akalmandi se sab kuch manage kar leta hai, aur thori der badh Haseena Malik chala bhi jata hai thana ni8 duty k liye Cheetah k sath....!!

Now again coming back to Rud..... After sending Haseena Malik for thana and Karishma Singh to home....!! Rud started to drive his car. N within few minutes he covers a bit distance n meet a person. We come to know from their conversation that Rud is a person who has been sent to this thana for some mission, n he is day by day trying to become close with everyone n gain their support for him by his behaviour. He knows how to become a good idol for each n everyone. He applied different patterns n tricks to become each ones favourite. Now the other peraon question him about both Haseena Malik n Karishma Singh... n he replied that he has also choose different approaches for both the ladies, as they are very opposite to each other. For Haseena he wants to play with his words n gentlemenness. While for Karishma he is a flirt boy as well as he has an invisible control over her (that is the threatning n blackmailing) n he will eventually win Karishma's heart, so it becomes very easy for him to accomplish his mission n not even letting them to know, what he has came here for.

N later that night we also see a sweet soft distance love blooming between our Karila (Karishma + Lalla) jodi. They listens song 🎵 together to feel each other's presence.

Here continuing from where I left u all....
































So next morning 🌄 Rud quickly got up it was around 5'o clock n saw that Santu has called him n also texted him....

'Bahut zaroori hai app se milna...plzz Rudy...thane mein nahi ho sakta hai... thane jane se pahele agar kuch ho sakta hai toh bahut accha hota... plzz it's very urgent...'

Rud becomes a slight worried at first, but he actually knew what might be the reason for Santu's such texts to him.

He called Santu n informed that he is going for running 🏃🏻 if she wants to talk with him personally then she can join him there too...n texted his location to her....!!

He went to the nearby safari park and after 1 hr of running 🏃🏻 he came to an uncrowded place at the back side of the safari park n spot an innocent girl who was eagerly waiting for him but with a bit sadness...... He went to her, without any wait.....!!!

Rud : A very good morning bahena..!! 😁😁

S : Morning RUDY..!! 😐😐

Rud : Arre..'good' kaha gayi..?? (Santosh looked at him confusingly) Morning k pehele wala good..!!

S : App yeh sab choriye...bahut important baat karni hai app se..!! (Rud gave a look for her continuance) App shayad naa sahi kahe rahe the...!! Cheetah na bahut badal gaya hai....!! Abb woh bilkul pahele jaisa nahi raha...!! Apko pata hai....wo naa mujh se thik se baat bhi nahi kar raha hai pichle kuch din o se.... aur toh aur meri taraf mur k dekhta bhi nahi.... baat karne jao toh kaheta hai bahut kaam hai.... upar se abb toh Santosh ji kahete hai mujhe.... thik se naam bhi nahi leta hai mera...!!

Rud : Kyun tumhara koi aur bhi naam hai 'Santosh' k sewa, jo mujhe nahi pata ho, aur usse pata ho....??

S : Haa hai, lekin woh sirf ghar k aur khash kar k papa k liye hi hai, lekin app aishe kyun puch rahe ho...?? Aur toh aur sab ne ek baar sunna tha mera woh naam...!! Lekin iss se uss ka kaya taluk...??

Rud : Arehh tum hi ne toh kaha ki Cheetah abb tumhe Santosh ji kaheta hai, thik se naam nahi leta hai tumhara, issiliye pucha main ne...!!

S : Off ohhh... bhaiya, app naa bilkul samjhe nahi meri baat ko...!! Woh na mujhe pehele Santu ji kaheta tha lekin pata nahi kaya huya hai ki woh Santosh ji bulwane lage hai abb...!! Iss k piche kaya karan ho sakta hai...?? App hi soch k bolo mujhe...!! Kyun ki mera toh samajh mein nahi ghush raha hai...!!

Rud : 'Professionalism' bahena, professionalism....shayad usse lagne laga hai ki duty hours k samay professional way mein hee baat karna chahiye...!!

S : Par pahele toh aisha nahi tha woh...phir...achanak se kaise..(cutting her)

Rud : Shayad hume dekh kar... matlab....abb tum mujhe RUDY bulya rahe ho....aur hum bhi tumhe bahena...!! Lekin jab thori der badh hum thane mein honge toh wahi eapas se.... Sir aur Ms. Sharma mein transfer ho jaiga sab kuch....hai ki nahi...??

S : Haa..yeh baat shayad sahi hai app k.. ho sakta hai yeh, lekin..app ek baat batao ki agar wo mera sath professionalism maintain kar raha hai...aur duty k time sirf kaam peh hi focused rahena ka faishla liya hai toh phir uss din Vish k sath woh zadya waqt faltu mein zaya nahi kar rahe the kaya..??

Rud : (in mind - jealously 😅, accha hai..)
Ek mint...abhi tum ne kaya kaha..??

S : Wahi toh..Vish ki baat kar rahe hai..app ko pata ...(cutting her)

Rud : Nahi nahi waqt kay..?? Exact word batana jo tumhne abhi abhi kaha..!!

S : Waqt zaya..!!

Rud : Hummm...!! Accha aur koi problem hai..!! Yeha phir sirf itna hi..!!??

S : Hum na samajh nahi pa rahe hai usse.. Vish k ek baar k request mein woh wahi peh khara raha...aur toh aur uss Vish ki bacchi ne nervousness k banahe pani k glass fhisal ne ka bahana kara toh Cheetah ne uss k hath bhi pakra...!!

Rud : Accha, toh tum iss e pareshan ho..??

S : Haa.... hona nahi chahiye kaya..??

Rud : Dekho Cheetah ne jo kiya woh sahi toh tha..!! Glass ko phisal ne se bachaya...agar glass gir jata aur toot jata toh kisi ko chot lag jata na...u know... prevention is better than cure.. isn't it..??

S : (with extra stress) Lekin RUDY uss ne Vish ki hath pakra tha..woh toh dekho..??!!

Rud : Humm..woh toh tumhara bhi pakra tha..jis din Ms. Malik ki hath mein chot lagi thi..aur hum badh mein jab medical store ki ek admi ko lekar aya tabh Bd ki dukar mein the tum dono....Waise huya kaya tha tumhe..??

S : Woh mera hath jal gaya tha garam chai k waje se..!!

Rud : Aur Cheetah kaya kar raha tha..??

S : Woh baraf laga raha tha humare hath par..!!

Rud : Iska matlab k woh, care karta hai tumhara..ek dost ki tarha..bass abb thora samajh ne laga ki tumhare piche sirf mandrane se kuch nahi hoga..!! Woh tumse payar karta tha..lekin jab usse laga ki tum dosti ko importance deh rahe ho toh uss ne bhi wahi kiya...dosti peh focused...har waqt har jagha woh tumhare liye khara raha.. lekin jab usse laga ki tum usse uss tarha nahi dekhte ho toh usse shayad mahesoosh huya ki lardkiya na bande ki niyat nahi dikhte hai...paisa, looks, ambition, intelligence, unka body strength, n so on..!! Yeh sab dekhte hai..toh woh sirf jitna zaroori hai utna hi concerned hai tumhare liye abb..!!

S : Lekin mujhe yeh accha nahi lag raha hai naa....woh pahele jaisa tha, wahi accha lagta tha mujhe..!!

Rud : Sirf itna hi na..!! (Santu gave him an expression like - 'abhi k liye itna hee') Accha pahele yeh baat batao k tum khud ki kabiliyat ko sabit karne k liye kaya naya chiz kar rahe ho..?? ( Santu literally got blank n don't know what to answer him )
Accha choro..tumhare idol kon hai..?? (She is now confused..whose name she should take..??) Chalo mein help kar deta hoon..!! Option mera choice tumhara..Tum tumhare HM aur KM k beech mein se kisi ko chuno..!!
('Sab se tough hai yeh toh'..she thought, while Rud was smiling..)
Thori der pahele waqt zaya karne ki baat kar rahe the na tum..!! Woh Cheetah nahi tum kar rahe ho..!! Khud peh thori dhayan do bahena..!! Dekho tum sirf ek junior Constable hi nahi ho....walki cyber crime k in-charge bhi ho..!! Ek aisi department jaha par sab se zadya dimag lagana pardhta hai...yani ki intelligence..aur agar ajj tum yeha ho iska matlab tum intelligent ho lekin logo ko lagta hai ki tum jarbuddhi ho..

S : Bhaiya app bhi...!!!

Rud : Hum kahe nahi rahe hai tumhe..bass samjha rahe hai...toh baat ko pahele samjho...phir tumhe jo lagega woh karna...
Waise abhi abhi tumne example set kar diya..( she looks at him confusingly )
Jo intelligent hota hai..woh baat ko pahele samajhte hai, paristhiti ko dekhte hai, apne mutabik jitna sa ho sake jach partal karte hai phir ja k koi kadam utha ta hai yeha phir kuch kahete hai..!! Pura baat sune bina hi kuch kahena yeha phir karne ko intelligent nahi dull headed person kahelata hai yani ki jarbuddhi..!! (Santu was trying to figure out that, was he really helping her out or was insulting her taking the advantage of the situation...😅😅)
Tumhara problem pata hai kaya hai..?? Tum sab thik karte ho lekin jaha par jitna react karna hota hai..usse kam yeha phir zadya kar dete ho...jaha jo kahena nahi hota hai waha wo kahe dete ho..!! Usse thora control karo..aur dekho sab thik hone lagega...filhal tumhara idol kon hai woh mein bata sakta hoon...!! Toh batayu...??Yeh mamla toh gussa, mukka aur laat se sulajh ne walie hai nahi...toh bacha kon..??

S : Haseena maddam...matlab Maddam Sir..

Rud : Exactly, Ms. Malik toh hai hee jazbaati..aur tumhara case jazbaat se hee jure huya hai...toh unke har ek kaam karne k taur-tarike peh dhayan do aur zarurat pardhne par toh hum hai hee tumhare liye..!! Aur rahi baat Cheetah ki vyavahaar ka toh uss e thora waqt do aur khud ko bhi...kaya chahete ho aur kyun..jach lo pahele... Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna...

"Hum kisi se khusiya mange yeh hume manzoor nahi, Mangi huyi khusiyo se kiss ka bhala hota hai...Jitna apni taqdeer mein likha hai, Woh zaroor adaa hota hai...!!"

Jo tumhare liye banaye gaya hai wo tumhara hee rahega lekin agar tum uss k upar jor jabardast karogi toh woh tumhara nahi rahega aur agar mur k bhi nahi dekhogi tabh bhi woh tumhara nahi baan sakta hai..!!
Filhal tum ghar jao aur fresh ho kar change kar k thane mein duty par ayo...abhi hume nikal na hoga..!! Waise bhi Junior Constable cum cyber crime in-charge Ms. Santosh Sharma khud dhund ne ki kosish kijiye...Mr. Cheetah Chaturvedi ki inn harkato ki piche chupe huye raaz...!!


"Yun toh bhule hai hume log kai, pehle bhi bahut se...Par tum jitna koi unme se, kabhi yaad nahi aaya..!!"

While going he uttered these words n left Santu in a deep thinking...but she also left from there in order to go to thana for her duty...n was trying to analyze everything....











Bahut din badh aye hai, thora payar jatadena plzzz....!!!
Abhi k liye itna hi, jald hi lautenge....!!
Lekin payar nahi mila toh bahut late kar denge hum....!!!

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