Painful love~Elmax~

By elmaxfanfiction

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⚠️FINISHED⚠️This is my second elmax story! This story takes place after s2. Hopper and Billy are alive. Max a... More

Chapter 1: Weird And Confusing Feelings
Chapter 2: Are You A Dyke?
Chapter 3: The Come Out
Chapter 4: Billy
Chapter 5: Why Won't She Tell me?
Chapter 6: Baking Cookies
Chapter 7: The Apology
Chapter 8: Steve's Mad
Chapter 9: I Like Girls
Chapter 10 : Because I Love You
Chapter 11: Neil
Chapter 12: Where Are They?
Chapter 13: The Explanation
Chapter 14 : He Got Arrested?
Chapter 15: Talks With Mom
Chapter 16 : Talk With Joyce And Hopper
Chapter 17: Will You Be My Girlfriend?
Chapter 18: Lunch Time
Chapter 19: Secret
Chapter 20: Jancy Breakup
Chapter 21: Neil Escaped?
⚠️Not An Update⚠️
Chapter 22: El.. I Love You..
Chapter 23: ?
⚠️Not An Update⚠️
Chapter 25: Hospital Part 2
Chapter 26: Hospital Part 3
Chapter 27: Hospital Part 4
Chapter 28: What Happened?
Chapter 29: My Love
Chapter 30: She Woke Up?!
Chapter 31: Robin
Chapter 32: Visiting Max
Chapter 33: Party Catch Ups
Chapter 34: A Gift From Will
Chapter 35 : Do You Like Her Robin?
Chapter 36: Ronance (a Little) Part 1
Chapter 37: Ronance Part 2
Chapter 38: Getting Food For Max
Chapter 39: Nick
Chapter 40: Nick Part 2
Chapter 41: Ronance Part 3
Chapter 42: Nick Part 3
Chapter 43: Nick Part 4
Chapter 44: Robin's News
Chapter 45: Doctor's News
Chapter 46: Byler
Chapter 47: Finally Free
Chapter 48: Surprise!!
Chapter 49: Surprise Part 2
Chapter 50: Truth Or Dare
Chapter 51: Studying
Chapter 52: "best friend" essay
Chapter 53: Back To School
Chapter 54: PE Basketball Game
Chapter 55: PE Part 2
Chapter 56: Emily
Chapter 57: A Casual Day
Chapter 58: Decorating The Christmas Tree
Chapter 59: Max& Susan
Chapter 60: Robin&Max
Chapter 61: Robin&Max&El
Chapter 62: Sleepover (Elmax)
Chapter 63: Nick Wtf?
Chapter 64: Cinema Hangout
Chapter 65: Art Class
Chapter 66: Sleepover (the Party)
Chapter 67: Bowling Alley Part 1
Chapter 68: Bowling Alley Part 2
Chapter 69: At The Mall Part 3
Chapter 70: The Mall Part 4
Chapter 71: Nancy (hangout Part 1, With The Older Teens)
Chapter 72: Hangout Part 2
Chapter 73: Hangout Part 3(+ronance)
Chapter 74: Nancy, Robin, El And Max
Chapter 75: Last Night Of The Sleepover
Chapter 76: Christmas
Chapter 77: Christmas Part 2 (+ronance)
Chapter 78: Ice Skating
Chapter 79: The Incident
Chapter 80: The Incident Part 2
Chapter 81: The Incident Part 3
Chapter 82: The Incident Part 4
Chapter 83: Principal's Decision
Chapter 84: The Party Talk
Chapter 85: Questions
Chapter 86: Nick&Troy
Chapter 87: The Park
Chapter 88: Homophobia
Chapter 89: Benny's Burgers
Chapter 90: At El's House
Chapter 91: Ronance
Chapter 92: Ted
Chapter 93: The Wheelers (part 2)
Chapter 94: Get Away From Her
Chapter 95: Robin&El&Max
Chapter 96: The Locker
Chapter 97: Painful Love (last Chapter)
⚠️New Elmax Story⚠️

Chapter 24 : Hospital

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El's pov

We've been waiting for a long time. I was so nervous. All of our friends ran to the hospital as soon as they heard the news when we called them. Mike, will, lucas, Dustin, even Nancy, Jonathan, Steve and Robin.

Honestly the hospital didn't allow too many people but hopper insisted since he's the chief so they agreed.

Will's pov

Hopper and I were sitting next to el. I felt so bad. I was nervous about max. Seeing el so nervous broke my heart.

Today was supposed be her best day. Max asking her to be her girlfriend and all great. Until Neil came. And ruined everything..

Robin's pov

I was sitting opposite or el and will. Hopper stood up to talk to Joyce. I felt so bad.. El looked so nervous and upset. I couldn't help but go sit next to her. Her leg was shaking nervously, as she bit her nails nervously.

I also heard the news max asking el out and it made me feel sad about the fact that hours later everything was ruined.

I put my hand on El's knee so she stops shaking. She stopped biting her nails too and looked at me. I gave her a sad smile. "Hey..it's gonna be okay, she will be fine" I said.

"how do you know" she quietly said. I sighed. "i don't know what exactly happened but what I know is that max is strong.. Very strong" I said. "yeah.. she is" she said. I smiled and took her hand.

"i know we never like spoke to each other but I want you to know that you can talk to me.. If you want" I said. She looked at me.

"you seem nice,so maybe I will" she said slightly smiling. I could tell she was still pretty nervous but I tried to distract her for a little until the doctor comes and informs us.

Hopper came, he saw me taking his seat but nodded and sat somewhere else. He gave me a small thankful smile. I smiled back.

El's pov

A few minutes later the doctor came. All of us stood up immediately. "Hold up, all of you sit down" the doctor said looking at us like we're a class telling to sit down by the teacher.

We sat back down. "alright..." the doctor started and sighed. My heart was beating so fast that I thought it would rip and come out.

"We're going to need to do a surgery to get the bullet out, also she might not wake up-" he said. "What?" hopper said. My heart broke. "No sir I don't mean dying, you didn't let me finish, I mean that she will probably wake up in a few hours or a few days, we hope so" he said.

Robin was still holding my hand, so was will who was also sitting next to me. "what? What do you mean doctor, you mean she will be in coma by surgery or something else?" hopper asked. "What that's impossible-" Mike said annoyed but nervously.

"shut up Mike" lucas said, he stopped so the doctor can continue talking. "It looks like she's been hurt in the brain as well, she might have hit her head somewhere as well" he said.

"It's not serious, she will most likely wake up and stay in the hospital for a few days after to heal" he said. "so she's in a coma?" Dustin asked.

"yes but it's not very serious, most of the times the patients wake up because its normal when you hit your head, in max's mayfield case it's not very serious but we just have to be patient, wait and do the surgery" the doctor said.

"oh.. Okay doctor thank you" hopper quietly said. The doctor nodded and was about to leave. "Um-doctor, when's the surgery happening" max's mom asked. She was also there. "In a bit, don't worry I will inform you as soon as possible on how it went" he said as we nodded and he left.

I put my elbows on my knees covering my face with my hands. I couldn't believe this. Everything was going so well until Neil came. How did he even escape. He hurt my max.. I hate him more than anything.

My day had been ruined. Today I was the happiest I had ever been. Just max and I happy. Seeing max hurt broke me. I wish I was in her place. I don't want her hurt.

I silently started crying still covering myself by my hands and knees. I felt hands rubbing my back. I assumed it was Robin and will since they're the ones next to me.

"hey... she's gonna be okay el" will quietly said. "It's my fault.." I whispered. "what did she say?" I heard Dustin asking since the others were sitting in front of us. "she says it's her fault" Robin said.

I still didn't look up to face them. "El... It's not your fault" hopper said. "It is.." I accidentally let out a sob, god knows how long I've been holding it.

"I wish I had my fucking powers to protect her.. I couldn't do anything.. That stupid man hurt her and I just sat there watching her getting hurt" I cried. "Like you said el, you couldn't do anything you were tighted up" Robin said. I shook my head.

"Hopper saved her.. thank you" I said. "of course kid" he said. I didn't dare to look up. I couldn't handle the pity. I just wanted to cry in peace. Everyone's attention was at me. I couldn't help it, I tried to hold my tears for so long.

"El...you heard the doctor she will wake up and be fine-" Mike said. "What if she doesn't? I can't handle seeing her unconscious until she wakes up" I said. "I know, we will all wait patiently,we all care about her a lot, I'm sure she will wake up, max is strong and we should trust the doctors" hopper said.

"I don't trust anyone" I quietly said. There was a silence for a second. "El...look at me" hopper said. I finally looked up, all eyes were on me.

"doctors are nice here" Joyce softly said. "not all of them" I said. "I know el but trust us, they're the nice ones" Joyce said. I nodded looking down.

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