Meetha sa Ruhani ISHQ

By AnupreetKaur347

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Trying to write my version of Sounoor as Mineil. The story goes on from where it was stopped in the show "PAT... More

Intro
Story promo 1
1. I need my chef in the kitchen
2. Neil shares his feelings with Mini.
3. Arya excited for the trip
4. Isha to hurt Mini
5. Will Ritwick Help?
6. Neil's possessiveness and Dadu's Warning
7. Isha played dirty
8. Neil's Guilt
9. Dadu's anger
10. Mini had lost hope in love again
11. Second hearing for the court case
12. Kirpal gives testimony
13. Neil to win the meeting rights?
14. Shocking news for Neil
15. Surprising News for Mini
16. Khatri gets what he deserves
17. Mini and Cooking
18. Neil found Mini's letter
19. Neil's lovemania 1
20. Arya is back from the trip
21. Arya praises Mini's cooking
22. Arya gets to know about Neil's past
23. ArMi's prank on Neil
24. Mini's lovemania
25. Neil's lovemania 2
26. Mineil moments 1
27. Mini stressed about Arya's exam
28. Neil drenched in heavy rain
29. Neil has high fever
30. Neil confesses in fever
31. Mini's diary entry after years
32. Neil's lovemania 3
33. Dadu Biji's Anniversary
34. Neil's dreamy behaviour
35. Who will propose?
36. Bike Road trip
"Sorry but need a break"
"I am Back"
Story promo 2
37. Mini has fever
38. Mini and injection
39. Neil mollifies his upset Mini
40. Mini's admirer
41. Neil overhears Mini's confession
42. Mini visits Khurana House
43. Enjoying movie together
44. Mickey's call
45. Neil is insecure
46. Neil insecurities rises to the peak
47. Mini calms down Neil
48. Mini's possessiveness
49. Sandhu Aunty Taunts Neil
50. Trio's Delhi trip
51. Armineil on their way to Delhi.
52. Reaching Delhi
53. Keya happy with ArMiNeil
54. Neil's hidden talent
55. Neil plays guitar for Mini
56. Mini's stern reply to Isha's shit
57. Mini's hidden talents
58. Mineil's musical pairing
59. Arya and Keya enjoys Mineil's musical pairing
60. Mini talks to Keya
61. Mineil couple moment 1
62. Mini's philosophy
Story promo 3
63. Is ArKeMi upto something?
64. Mini's Feelings
65. Mini's proposal
66. Neil's feelings
67. Mini surprises Neil
68. Mineil sizzling romantic dance
69. Mineil's first kiss
70. Neil's Birthday started amazingly
71. Neil's Birthday party
72. Correct explanation of Equality
73. Neil feels the fulfilment
74. Ritwick spots Mineil together
75. Neil self doubts.
76. Mini develops complacency in Neil
77. Saraswati comes a day earlier
78. Mineil couple moment 2
79. Keya gets emotional
80. Isha's plan backfires due to Mini
81. Mineil corn date at Delhi
82. Mineil happy moments 1
83. Arya's new session of school
84. Proposal for Mini?
85. SHAADI?
86. Preet to tease Mini
87. ArNeil first meet wasn't in restaurant?
88. Mineil hearty convo
89. Mineil movie date
90. Surprise for their little munchkin
91. Arya's birthday party
Story promo 4
92. Saroj Mami scratches Mini's old emotional scars
93. Why Mini hated to hope?
94. Neil able to coax Arya again
95. Mini is not well
96. Restaurant's profits
97. Restaurant expansion ideas
98. Neil's allergy
99. Restaurant expansion party
100. Neil's nightmare
101. Mini takes stand for Sundar
102. Are Neil's nightmares really intuitions?
103. Mini's accident
104. Was the accident planned?
105. Mini relaxes Neil
106. Neil takes care of Mini
107. Neil brings Mini to the haveli
108. Suspicious arrival at the haveli
109. Mini scolds Neil
110. Hot fomentation for Mini
111. Neil spots Mini's new diary.
112. Mini's emotions residing in her diary entries.
113. Mini is also a heavy sleeper like Neil?
114. Mini has recovered from sprains
115. Neil's friend at the restaurant
116. Vaishnavi and Mini bonds well
117. Vaishnavi confides in Mini
118. Cool teasing session
119. Neil mollifies his upset Mini musically.
120. Neil teases Mini
121. Nee meets Nee
122. Mini enjoys the brosis banter
123. Mineil romance 1
124. Mineil romance 2
125. Restaurant hiring
126. Mini in trouble?
127. Mini is forcefully drugged.
128. What are Rape drugs?
129. Mini speaks her heart out in sedation
130. Drug side effects 1
131. Neil hides the severity of Mini's health from her.
132. Drug side effects 2
133. Drug side effects 3
134. Mini suffers a cardiac arrest.
135. Arya affected by Mini's health
136. Mini consoles Arya
137. Mini is out of danger now.
Story promo 5
138. Mini has recovered completely
139. Mineil visits the temple.
140. Neil advises Mini.
141. Mini and Abhay
142. Abhay is Neil's Cousin
143. Neerja's Mr One?
145. Friends get together 1
146. Friends get together 2.
147. Rakshabandhan 1
148. Rakshabandhan 2
149. Neil upto something?
150. Neil's surprise
151. Passionate Love
152. Mini's Birthday Celebration
153. Engagement date finalised
154. Stern Reply to Saroj Mami
155. Neil calms down Mini
156. Mineil's evening at Delhi
157. Mineil's evening at Delhi 2
158. Mineil's evening in Delhi 3
159. Mini's departure to Australia
160. Mini and Neil miss each other.
161. Neil's sudden outburst.
162. Mini doesn't talk to Neil
163. Neil comforts Mini in Australia
164. Teasing session in Australia
165. Mineil to go to a party
166. Neil surprised by Mini's possessiveness
167. Neil cools down Mini's rage
168. Cruise Couple competition
169. Mineil enjoys the cruise party
170. Vidyut admires Mini
171. Mini comforts Neil
172. Cutie
173. ArNe Tiff.
174. ArNe has fever.
175. Arya's emotional introspection
176. Poonam Maasi meets Neil
177. Poonam learns Neil's past.
178. Where is Neil?
Story promo 6
179. Neil to have... urges?
180. Neil suffers from drug reactions
181. Neil's inhibitions lowered.
182. Neil is intoxicated.
183. Neil's sensuous move
184. Mineil steamy night
185. Mineil's steamy night 2
186. Getting up in each other's arm
187. Neil feels broken
188. Neil's reports
189. Neil is finally fine
190. Mini receives another offer.
Sneek Peek of the story further

144. Preet is back

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By AnupreetKaur347

Next Morning,

Arya woke up and came to Neil's room after getting ready to wake him up breakfast but saw Neil sleeping while sitting on the couch with someone else sitting and sleeping too.

She shook him, he woke up and looked at Arya.

Neil: Good Morning Choti Madam! Uth gaye aap?

Abhay also woke up due to his voice.

Abhay: Choti Madam?

Arya: (pointing at him) Yeh kaun hai?

Abhay opened his eyes and saw Arya in school dress.

Abhay: Kitni cute bacchi hai... Arya? Right?

Arya nodded.

Neil: Mera cousin hai.... Yaad hai iska phone aaya tha garden me?...

Arya: Ha... tum kitna excited hoke baatein kar rahe the.

Neil: Ha... Abhay naam hai.. aapko pata hai aapki Veerbalika ke school me hi tha... uska bahot accha friend hai.

Abhay: Veerbalika?

Neil: Mini... usko veerbalika kehti hai yeh....

Abhay: Naam to bilkul sahi diya hai... Ms Karate Black Belt ko.

Arya: Mere papa ne diya hai.. vo hamesha veerbalika hi bolte the usko.

Neil was about to tell him about her but Abhay said: Hmm... (looking at Neil) I know.

Neil: Ok... (to Arya) Breakfast me kya khaogi?

Arya: Aloo parantha.

Neil: Ok.... Chalo... (to Abhay) Tu freshen up ho ja... main abhi aata hu.

Abhay: Aapke haathon ke breakfast ke liye to main 2 min me ready hoke aa jaun...

Arya and Neil came upstairs and saw Mini and Neerja in the kitchen.

Mini was already making Aloo paranthas and Neerja was talking to her and both were laughing together.

Neil: Tum kyu bana rahi ho breakfast?

Mini: Tum itni jaldi uth bhi gaye?... Kal raat to der se soye hoge na... isiliye I thought aaj main hi bana deti hu...

Arya: Mujhe laga tum so rahi hogi to maine Neil ko utha diya tha... Sorry.

Neil: Koi problem nahi hai... Vaise bhi kal shaam tak to so hi raha tha main... Abhi to main ekdum fresh hi hu...

Arya: Main apna bag lekar aati hu....

Mini: (to Arya) Ok..... (to Neil) Abhi to fresh hi hoge na... apne bhai ke saath raat bhar has jo rahe the... (teasing) ab hum un landladies jaisi nahi hai na... jo tenants ko enjoy bhi na karne de.... tujhe pata hai Neerja... Kuch tenants aise hote hai jo landladies ko bhi aapas me enjoy nahi karne dete...

Neil: HAW?... Main enjoy nahi karne deta... pure din soke tum log raat me jagrata manaoge aur main complain bhi na karu?

Mini: Hmm... Aur kal tum raat me ratjaga nahi kar rahe the?... Neil Oberoi?

Neil: Ha to... ek din to chalta hai na..

Mini: Hum bhi to roz roz nahi kar rahe the jo tum itna chid rahe the...

Neil: (frowning) I hate you yaar.

Mini: (cutely) I hate you too... Chef Neil Oberoi.

Neerja started laughing looking at them.

Mineil stopped their cute banter seeing her laughing.

Abhay also came upstairs and saw her laughing so wholeheartedly.

Neerja: Kya ladte ho tum log... kitna cute lagta hai yaar... (She pulled Neil and Mini's cheeks and said) So sweet...

She laughed again.

Neerja: Vaise ek baat to hai... tum logo ko dekhke realise hota hai ki ladne me bhi pyaar hota hai... I so wish you stay the same forever yaar....

Mini: (Side hugging Neil) We are gonna stay the same.

Neil: (wrapping his arm around her, pecked her forehead) Surely!

Neerja: Aww!

Mineil parted and served breakfast.

Arya came upstairs and saw Abhay lost.

Arya shook him.

Abhay looked at her and bent to her.

Abhay: Kya hua?

Arya: Aap kaha khoye hue ho?

Abhay: Main... main... (excuse) Kuch soch raha tha.... aur kuch nahi...

Arya: Aao breakfast kar lo... hamare saath.

Mini: Arya.... School bus ke liye late ho jaogi... aao jaldi.

They sat together.

Abhay: (after eating the parantha) Amazing parantha bhai.... bahot tasty hai...

Neil: Maine nahi banaya hai.

Abhay: To?

Mini: Maine banaya hai.

Abhay: Wonderful... mujhe nahi pata tha ki Aunty ki tarah tu bhi itna mast khana bana leti hai.

Mineil looked at each other and chuckled.

Arya: Are Veerbalika to bahot ganda khaana banati thi... vo to Neil ne sikhaya tab se accha banane lagi hai.

Abhay: Ohhhooo... (teasingly) To Neil bhai ne personal cooking class diye 'apni' Mini madam ko?

Mini looked at him, getting teased and nodded lightly.

Mini: Tu breakfast kha... zyada na chapad chapad mat kar.

They had breakfast together and then Mini went to drop Arya at the bus stand and then to the market for getting the monthly groceries.

Neil, Abhay and Neerja were sitting on the sofa in the main hall.

Neil: (To Abhay) Tu kab tak hai yaha patiala me?

Abhay: 3-4 din... vo dinner hoga na... uske baad chala jaunge... mera aur Neerja ka flight maybe saath me hi hoga.

Neerja: Ha... maybe... but Dinner ke details mujhe abhi tak aaye nahi hai... venue final ho gaya hai kya?

Abhay: Patiala Babes hi hai venue. Kal Mini ne quotation bhej diya tha to maine finalise karwa diya hai.

Neerja: Oh... Ok... better then.... (looking at Neil) Mujhe kuch kaam hai... Me bahar ja rahi hu... thodi der me aa jaungi... Bye...

Neil: Ok... Bye.

She went.

Mini came to the haveli and heard Abhay saying.

Abhay: Aaj Neerja has rahi thi to aisa lag raha tha jaise main to kho hi gaya hu...

Mini chuckled hearing this. Neil also smiled remembering himself feeling the same with Mini.

Abhay: Tu has kyu rahi hai?

Mini: Hota hai... Hota hai... (looking at Neil) People do get crazy in love....

Abhay looked at Neil and saw him smiling remembering something.

Abhay: (teasingly) Bhai?.. Aap to bolte the... yeh sab to filmo ki baatein hai aur aapko to shaadi ke baad tak me aisa kuch feel nahi hua...

Mini came behind Neil and wrapped her arms around his neck.

Mini: Attraction ya infatuation me thodi na feel hoga... (bending down her face to be beside Neil's) Neil ko pyaar me to bahot kuch naya experience karne ko mila.... (Neil turned his face to hers, Mini continued) haina?... (teasingly looking at him) Bolo?

Neil: (looking at her) You are teasing me?

Mini: (smiling mischievously) Ha..... aur mujhe bahot maza aa raha hai.

Preet came to the haveli and She saw Mini and Neil looking at each other. Mini was hugging Neil by his neck and looking at him teasingly.

Preet: Mini?...

Mini looked at her and immediately took back her hands. She went to her.

Mini: Hi Preet... Yeh Abhay hai... vo 10th class wala Abhay Singhania.... yaad hai?

Preet: Ha... par yeh france chala gaya tha... software engineering ke liye... yeh yaha?

Mini: Ha... Neil ka cousin hai kuch din yahi hai..

Preet: Aur abhi yeh kya ho raha tha?.... (whispered) Romance?

Mini saw Neil was looking at her with a mischievous smile.

Mini: Kuch nahi...

Neil: Aise kaise kuch nahi.... Ab meri baari hai... Aao Preet baitho na... 

Mini went to Neil and pointed her finger at him.

Mini: Don't you dare tease me...

Neil: Or Else?

Mini: (punching him lightly) I will kill you... Neil Oberoi!

Neil held her hand and pulled her closer.

Neil: (whispered to her) Tumpe to main roz hi marta hu..... Ek hi insaan ko kitni baar marogi?

Mini: (whispered) Shut Up!... I hate you!

Neil: (whispered) I hate you too...

She sat beside him laughing.

Preet and Abhay were confused as they didn't heard what Neil said.

Preet: Aisa kya kaha Neil ne?.... Jo tu itna has rahi hai...

Neil and Mini looked at each other and laughed again.

Mini: Kuch nahi hum paagal hai... chod tu... Vaise tu pind se wapas kab aayi?

Preet: Kal hi aa gayi thi... par tujhe Neil ke alawa kuch yaad rahe to na.

Abhay: Are dono baatein bhi aise aakhon aakhon me kar lete hai ki baakiyon ko kuch samajh hi na aaye.

Preet: Vo to hai hi na... Inke pyaar ki uniqueness hi wahi hai....

Both blushed.

Abhay, Preet and Mini reminisced their school times and Neil enjoyed their memories too.

Mini got a call and she went upstairs for her laptop.

Abhay: Yesterday, I was correct.... haina bhai...

Neil: Yeah... vo to maine kal hi bol diya tha..

Preet: Kya?

Abhay: Iss baar bhai ne bilkul perfect bhabhi choose ki hai...

All of them laughed.

Preet: Vaise Neil... Aaj to tumhara bhai bhi idhar hai... Mini se to puch puch ke thak gayi... tum hi bata do... Mini ne tumhe propose kaise kiya tha?

Abhay: Matlab bhai ne propose nahi kiya tha?.... (To Neil) Aap to kal mujhe encourage kar rahe the propose karne ke liye... khud ne nahi kiya tha?

Neil: Ha... Mini bhi kal yahi bolne waali thi jab maine usko rok diya tha... So yes.. I admit... Mini ne mujhe propose kiya tha.... maine nahi....

Abhay: Kaise kiya tha?...

Preet: Ha... yeh to usne mujhe bhi nahi bataya.... bolo...

Neil looked at the clock.

Neil: Are Arya ke aane ka time ho gaya hai.. Main lekar aata hu usko bus stand se....

He stood up and went outside.

Preet and Abhay laughed at his reaction.

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