Rao saab ka system aur Rani k...

By SubhamParmar

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introduction.
part 1.
part 2.
part 3.
part 4
part 5
part 6
part 7.
part 8.
part 9.
part 10.
part 11
part 12
part 13
part 15.
part 16.
part 17

part 14.

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Kahani ab tak :

Elvise us night apne room me aa kar apne dosto ke sath wine pine lagta hai. Uske friends Elvise ko is trh peg pe peg marte hue kabhi nhi dekha tha.

Unlogo ko feel hua ki Elvise kisi baat ko lekar sad jarur hai.
Lakshy lastly puchh hi baitha.

Lakshy: Elvise tu thik ho hai ?

Elvise ( ek aur ghhut marte hue ) : haa bhai mujhe kya ho sake hai?

Archit: lagta hai aaj Raw shahab apne system me hai.

Katariya: haa bhai systemmmm.

Elvise: lakshy saade tanne v system ke niche rhna padega ?

Elvise ko chhadh chuki thi.

Lakshy: ok yarr par itna mat pi. Kal subah v uthna hai.

Katariya ( lakshy ko jaberdasti ek glass wine pilate hue ) : tu saade bahut Gyaan pel raha .

Archit to Elvise: lakshy ke baat me to point hai.tu phle to itta kv na piya. Aaj koi baat h kya ? Khi teri panjab wali dhhoka to na de gayi.

Elvise ( archit ko dekhte hue ) : kuch waisa hi smjh le.

Lakshy ye sun khi naa khi smjh jata hai. Ki ho skta hai. Manisha se related baat hai.

Kuchh minutes baad jab katariya aur archit wahi bed pe talli ho so jata hai.

Tab lakshy Elvise ke pass sofe pe aata hai. Aur us se puchhta hai.

Lakshy: manisha se kuch related baat hai kya ?

Elvise: saade kya bol rha hai ? Aisi koi baat nhi hai.

Lakshy: mujhe bewkuf mat bana. Apne bhaichare ki kasam khha. ki manisha se related koi baat naa hai.

Elvise: saada bawda ho gaya hai. Ye bhaichara ki kasam wasam kyo de rea hai ?

Lakshy: tu batayega ki nhi ?

Elvise: wo boli she wants to be my friend forever.

Lakshy: to kya tune purpose kr diya.

Elvise: nhi par usne rejecte kr diya.

Lakshy: are kya bol rea hai tu ? Purpose v naa kiya. rejecte v kr di. Aur wo friend forever bnna chahti hai ?
Kya bolna chahta hai tu ?

Elvise: pata nhi yarr . Mai kya bolna chah rha hu? Manne khud naa pta hai? Bus itna pta hai. Ki mujhe kuchh na pta hai. Jo pta hai. Bus use hi pta hai.

Lakshy sofe pe se apne hairs ko khujlate hue khada ho jata hai.

Lakshy ( irritate hote hue ) : bhai soo jaa tu. Tanne chadh chuki hai. Tere se jyada baat kiya . To mai v pagal ho jauga .

Ye bol lakshy archit ke room me sone chala jata hai. Bcz archit uske bed pe so gaya tha.

Elvise ( akele me ek peg marte hue ) : wo boli wo mujhe deserve naa karti. Manisha rani ye bol ke tu ye bol gayi ki. mai tere ko deserve naa krta. RAO shahab tere ko deserve naa krta.

Ye bol Elvise wahi sofe pe hi so jata hai.

Idhar manisha ashika ke room me uske sath hi so jati hai. Bhale ashika kharate maar rhi ho. Par manisha ko furk nhi pad rha tha.

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Unlogo ki shooting continue rahi.

Aur manisha and Elvise ka friendship v bb house ke hi trh chal rha tha. Bus fruk ye tha ki manisha Elvise ke sath koi flirt nhi kr rahi thi. Aur Elvise bus wait me tha. So wo v manisha ko as a friend hi treat krne laga tha. Jab tak manisha ke trf se koi signal naa aa jaye.

Ab shooting ka climax aa gaya tha.
Aur Elvise ne last ke shooting script me likh diya tha. Tamnna ke jail jane ke baad. Harshit hospital me hi apne ek knee pe jhuk nidhi ko flowers ka guldasta le purpose kr deta hai. Aur nidhi " accept " kar leti hai. Aur Harshit nidhi ko ek strong hug deta hai.

Aur is tarh shoot ka THE END ho jata hai.

In sab ko hote 25 day lag jata hai.
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So one month later :

Shoot khatam hone ke baad sabhi lead cast and co cast ke liye usi hotel me party ka organisation hota hai.
Jis day party tha. Us day normally Elvise ka morning uske blog se start hota hai.

Party ki night:

Ek hall ko puri trh decorated kiya jata hai.

Aur usme sabhi invited log rhte hai special web series se related .

Manisha party ke hall me enter hoti hai. Apne black sari me .

Idhar Elvise naa chahte hue v manisha ke trf dekhne lagta hai.
Aur Elvise v party ka king lag rha tha.

Elvise normally manisha ke sath aayi hui ashika and abhishek se jaa ke milta hai. As a friend.

Abhishek to Elvise: bhai shahb aap to kehar dhha rahe ho mehfil me.

Elvise ( haste hue ) : naa bhai . Tu koun saa kam hai suit woot pehn ke aaya hai. Kahi aasika ji tumko dil na de baithe.

Manisha to ashika: ashika sakhhat laundi hai. Aise hi kisi ko dil nahi degi.

Abhishek ( haste hue ) : naa bhai ashika tu mujhe dil mat dena. Nhi to uske badle mujhe daily tujhe Cigarette and hukka dena padega.

Is baat pe teeno husne lagte hai.

Ashika: kamino mujhe jhel pao utna capacity na hai tum me.

Elvise to ashika: waise manna padega tera wo ex bf Herra tha jo tujhe jhel gaya utna day.

Ashika: haa rhne de . Ab mujhe uske type me koi interest nahi hai.

Abhishek: haa ashika tujhe koi better milega. Waise Elvise kaisa rahega.

Ashika : best but as a friend.

Elvise manisha ke trf dekh ke bola.

Elvise : saadi looks nice manisha ji.

Manisha Elvise ke trf dekhti hai. Aur softly bolti hai." Thanku ".

Abhishek ye dekh ke hus ke bolta hai.

Abhishek : ashika tu gaur kar rahi hai en dono ko. Manisha ab Elvise ke sath flirt bilkul v nhi krti. But Elvise manisha ko baton hi baton me compliment deta rhta hai.

Ashika: tu aaj dekh rha hai. Mai to phle se hi dekh rhi hu. Elvise hi nhi kisi aur ke sath v. Manisha ab flirt nhi krti hai.

Abhishek ( funnily smile krte hue) : manisha paltu .kahi tu pyar me to naa pad gayi kisi ke. Bcz tu hi boli thi. Ki tu kisi ke pyar krne ke baad flirting chhod deti hai.

Ye sun manisha abhishek ke shoulder pe ek thhapd deti hai.

Manisha: tu kya chahta hai . Mai jindgi bhar flirt hi krti rhu.

Elvise: haa shi hi ki jo tu ye flirting chhod di.

Abhishek: dekho dekho abhi v Elvise manisha ko compliment de rha hai. Saalo kahi tum logo ka sahi me to chakkar nhi chal rha hai ?

Ye sun Elvise blush hone ke sath husne lagta hai. Manisha v thoda blush krne lgti hai.

Par again wo abhishek ko marti hai.
Manisha: abhishek pantole khud jaa ke wo jiya ke sath chakkar chalata hai. Aur mere ko kah raha hai.

Abhishek ( haste hue ): mera chhod bua . Wo to koi chakkar na chal raha mera. Par apna bata . Baat mat ghhuma.

Manisha ( dramatically rone ke andaz me ): yarr abhishek kyo ye sab bol rha hai. Tu bb house me v mujhe kabhi Elvise ko chuma lene se rokta nhi tha. All time mujhe chuma lene ke liye push krta tha. Ab yaha v kar rha hai.

Abhishek: par teri help kar raha tha mai bua.

Manisha( irritate hote hue ) : ab mat kar .already aag lagi hui hai. Usme ghhee mat daal.

Ye sunte hi abhishek and ashika shocked ho gaye. Aur apna muh khole kabhi manisha ko dekhte to kabhi Elvise ko.

Manisha ko yaad aaya ye kya bol gayi wo again flow flow me.
Elvise to chup chap khada tha. Aur apne hussi ko control kar rha tha.

Manisha: mere kahne ka matalab ab to camra v nhi hai. Ab agr khi manchale ji ka yaa phir mera man machal gaya tab.

Manisha ye baat bol ke funny way me husne lagti hai. Apne baat ko funny banane ke liye.

Ashika ( relax hote hue ) : Yarr rani tu kya kya bolti hai .

Abhishek( haste hue ) : hamne again flirt krne wali manisha ko bahar nikal diya.

Manisha kuchh nhi bolti. Aur Elvise ke trf dekhti hai. To Elvise normal time ki trh mnisha ko smile kr ke dekh hi rha tha.

Ashika ( curiosity ke sath us party me enter kar rahi ek ladki ke trf ishara krte hue boli ) : Elvise wo Kriti Mehra hai na. Tumhari gf ?

Ye sunte hi manisha ke face pe se sari chamak hi gayab ho gayi. Sabhi us ladki ke trf dekhte hai. Manisha v dekhti hai. Aur manisha use dekhti hai.

Abhishek to Elvise: tera to us se breakup na ho gaya. To phir wo yaha kaise hai ? Kahi beta tu again use Ex se persent banane ka soch to nhi rha ?

Elvise manisha ke trf dekhta hai. To wo manisha ko dekh smjh jata hai ki manisha ko achha nhi lag rha hai.

Elvise ( normally way me ) : are naa bhai. Dost hai ab. par Mai naa bulata . Par mere kamine friends bulaye hoge.

Ashika: maine suna hai. Tera aur uska relationship 7 saalo ke baad tut gaya.

Abhishek: koi misunderstanding ho gayi hogi. Nhi to Kriti to dikhne me bahut innocence lagti hai. Achhi v hai. Maine ise bahut interview me dekha hai.

Manisha( irritate hote hue ) : abhishek pantole agar wo itni hi achhi hai . To jaa ke usi se baat kar . Yaha hamare pass kyo khada hai.

Abhishek ( surprised hote hue ) : are manisha mai to bus bata raha hu. Ki wo aisi hai. Isme gussa hone wali kya baat hai ?

Manisha ko khud nhi pata tha. Ki wo gussa kyo kar rahi hai.( jealousy😄)

Manisha( normal hote hue apne gusse ko control kar ) : jab Elvise ka 7 saal purana relationship nahi chal paya. To kisi aur ladki ke sath kaha se chalega.

Ye sun Elvise manisha ke trf questioning view se dekhne lga.

Elvise( seriously way me ) : jab ek insaan ko lag jaye. Ki dusra insaan uspe trust and bhharosha na kar raha ho. To wo rista tod hi dena chahiye. Bcz us relation me rah ke v koi fayda nhi hai.

Ye bol Elvise waha se chala jata hai.

Abhishek( caring way me ) : manisha tu uske ex ya persent ke v bare me kyo bolti hai. Dekh le phir Tujhse naraz ho gaya. Pichle time bb house me v aise hi react kiya tha. Jab tu boli thi " teri gf murkh hai. Teri gf kisi dudhwale ke sath bhhag jayegi "

Manisha ( apna muh tedha krte hue ignore kar ke boli ) : haa to gussa kare ya phir kuchh aur. Ab ye bb house nhi hai. Jo hum iske baton se hurt ho rone lagege.

Ashika ( surprise hote hue ) : Rani tere inside itna hi attitude bb house me v hona chahiye tha.

Sabhi log party me enjoy krne lagte hai. Kuchh log hatho me glass liye hue the. To kuchh log baaten kar rahe the. ashika aur abhishek ek sath party ka enjoy kr rahe the. Manisha v thi un dono ke sath par use dekh aisa nhi lag raha tha ki wo enjoy kar rahi hai.

Elvise to manisha ke aash pass hi rhna chahta tha par. Use other guest aur apne friends ke v sath rhna tha. To wo unhi logo ke sath busy ho jata.

Manisha kabhi Elvise ko dekhti kabhi kriti ko.Jo ki Elvise ke friends ke sath enjoy kar rahi thi. Aur Elvise ke friends use some time bhabi kehkar bulate rahte the.

Manisha Kriti ke trf dekhti hai.

Aur sochati hai. Ki

" ye kriti to mujhe bahut jyade sundar and attractive hai. Iski body figure bilkul perfect . Elvise iske aur mere bich to pakka isi ko choose krega. Bcz agar ladkiyo ke dimag ki sundarta ko dekh ladka use pasand krta to. Ladkiyo ko mekup krne ki koi jarurat hi nhi hoti. Aur ho sakta hai Elvise is se again relationship me aana chahta ho tabhi to usne ise party me bulaya. Aur jhhut bol rha hai ki uske friends le ise bulaya. And second wo Elvise jab itni achhi ladki ko chhod skta hai to mujhe to kuchh smjhega hi nhi. Manisha tu achha hi ki jo time pe smjh ke Elvise ke sath sab clear kr di ki we are just friend. "

Manisha apne thoughts se bahr tab aati hai. Jab abhishek use hilata hai.
Abhishek: Buwa kiya soch rahi hai. Le cold drink pi. Koun sa flavour legi ?

Manisha: naa abhishek tu hi pi. Mujhe nhi pina.

Itne me hi un teeno ko dur se dekh rahi. Kriti uske pass aane lagti hai.

Aur uske pass aake abhishek ke trf hand shake ke liye badhati hai.

Abhishek v us se hand milata hai.

Abhishek ( smile krete hue ) : hello miss kriti.

Kriti ( smile krte hue ) : apki to mai bb house ke baad fan hi ho gayi thi. Esliye apse milne ki meri bahut ikshha thi. Jo aaj fulfilled ho gayi.

Abhishek ( shatmate hue ) : hay aaj mera jivan safal ho gaya. Itni khubsurat ladki ko apna fan bante dekh.

( side se manisha and ashika in dono ka natak dekh rahi thi.)

Kriti( haste hue ) : thanks for compliment. But really aap bhale bb house nahi jite. Par phir v aap logo ke heart of king ho. Aur ye baat mai Elvise ko v kahti hu. Aur wo agree v krta hai.

Manisha ye sun ki ye Elvise se bate v krti hai .to usko naa chahte hue v taklif ho rha tha.

Tabhi kriti ki nazar manisha pe jati hai.
Manisha use fake smile deti hai.
Kriti v use fake smile de ke uske trf turn hoti hai.

Kriti ( smile krte hue ) : hello manisha rani. ( hand shake krte hue.)

Manisha ( full attitude me ) : hashtag one piece.

Is baat pe charo thoda huste hai.

Kriti: waise tumhara to bahut Hashtag viral hai. #abhisha , #tonisha and logo ka man naa bhara to #Elvisha v nikal diya.

Manisha: ab hamre fans humse itna pyar hi krte hai ko hum jiske sath rahte hai usi ke sath jod dete hai. Yaha se niklte hi tumhe pata lagega. #krisha ban gaya.

Kriti: krisha means?

Manisha: kriti + manisha, krisha.

( ye baat sun kriti manisha ko napasand karte hue v uske es baat pe genuinely khul ke hus padi )

Tab kriti ashika se v milti hai.

Manisha: waise is dress me tum bahut achhi lag rahi ho.

Kriti: thanks wo Elvise ko blue colour bahut pasand hai.

Ye sun again manisha ke face pe se husi gayab ho jati hai.

Kriti: waise manisha tumhare fans to bahut possessive hai tumhe leke. Mai apne interview me ek place pe tumhe immature bol di thi. To pura comment section gali se bhar gaya tha mera.

Manisha: haa ab mere fans mujhe apni family member mante hai. To possessive ho hoge hi.

Kriti: but mai koi galat thodi naa boli. Bus yhi keh rhi thi ki jyada flirt naa kare aur apne game pe dhayan de. Aur jyada flirts kv kv irritate krne lagta hai.

Manisha ( serious hote hue ): yarr bahin bigg boss khatam ho gaya hai. To ye baat v khatam kar. Aur rhi baat flirt ki to saala wo Elvise hi firstly mere sath flirt krna start kiya. Aur jab hum krna start kiye. To badnaam hum ho gaye.

Ashika: ab rhne de na yaar. Koun tujhe badnaam kr rha hai.

Kriti manisha ko is trh bolte dekh. Wo smjh gayi manisha ko jyada ungali krna thik nhi hai. Bcz kriti v janti thi ki " manisha single ladki hai jo Elvise ka system hila di thi. "

Kriti un logo ko bye bol waha se again Elvise ke friends ke sath enjoy krne lagti hai.

Elvise ke friend Elvise ko v khhich ke kriti ke pass le aate hai. Aur ek dance music bajta hai.

Mere dil ka telephone hai. Bajta ring ring ring raa raa ring. Meri dream girl ban ja re...🎶🎶

Manisha dekh rhi thi . Kriti again again Elvise ke pass dance krne jati thi. Aur Elvise ke friends v Elvise ko dhhaka mar ke Kriti ke side kr dete the.
Elvise kuchh drink v kar liya tha. Apne dosto ke pressure me. Aa kar.

Tabhi suddenly ek romantic song lag jata hai. (JANNIYE teri ye Adaa. )

Jisme Elvise ke gale lg ke kriti dance karne lagti hai. Elvise ko achha to nahi lag raha tha. Par wo kriti ko mana v nhi krna chahta tha. Bcz akhir tha to kisi jamane me unka relation real wala. Usi ke wajah se Elvise kuchh react nhi krna chahta tha. Jis se kriti hurt ho.

Ye sab manisha dekh dekh ke uska gussa badhta hi jaa raha tha.

Usi bich katariya aur uske kuchh friends ashika , abhishek and manisha ke pass aate hai.

katariya: bhailog ye dekho hamare lead actor and actress yaha pe aise sukhe sukhe hi enjoy kar rahe hai. Aisa nai chalega. Bhai hamara v system hai.

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( note : lakshy hi specially kriti ko bulaya tha. Taki manisha jealous ho ke Elvise ke sath clear kar le. )

To be continue:-

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