Jail break

By AlainaLoves1D

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When Jaki's ex gets out of jail and beats her and leaves her to die Louis Tomlinson finds her and takes her t... More

Jail break

The hospital

29 0 3
By AlainaLoves1D

Loui's p.o.v

"Do you know what happened?" i asked the girls sadie that was standing by me. "I..ya i think so" she stuttered. "would you mind telling me?" i asked her. "can i sit?" She asked me

"Coarse" i said pointing towards the extra chair that harry had been sitting in only moments ago. She sat down uncomfortably.

I sat down in my normal chair.

"I-Is she ok?" sadie asked "ya she is in a light coma..uh doctors said she should wake up tomorrow afternoon at the earliest." i said. sadie looked super relived. "So you know what happened?" i asked. she nodded.

"Umm"

A tear fell from her eye.

Sadie's p.o.v

Great the last thing i need was to cry! and in front of louis tomlinson!! he ia my idol my dream boy.

I snapped out of my thoughts "uhh her boyfriend carter.." i continued.

Loui's p.o.v

Boyfriend? my heart dropped. well i guess i wont be sticking around. "well ex..." she whispered. i don't know why but i felt happy that she was single maybe... no no louis Eleanor just dumped you! get over it louis! "he uhh shot her a while back and got turned in and sent to jail and i guess came back for her."

"Thats awful"

"Ya..she thought he was the one..." She whispered.

A tear rolled down from her eye and she quickly wiped it away and laughed. I knitted my eyebrows together. I think she noticed because she quickly said "sorry...I-I" she sighed. "never mind...." she whispered.

"If you don't mind me asking.. why are you here?"

"I-I.. well I found her.." Damn why can't I talk? I'm so worried about her. she might not ever wake up and it could be my fault. If I would have left for the studio earlier..I could have found her earlier.

The door opened breaking me out of my thoughts. I looked up and saw Niall. He walked into the room and shut the door. He looked at me and instantly noticed I was upset. A look of worry flashed on his face. he walked towards me and Sadie.

"Is everything ok Lou?" he asked. I nodded "ya.." I whispered quieter than I thought. "And who is this beautiful young lady?" Niall asked looking at Sadie. Her cheeks flushed red.

Sadie's p.o.v

He thinks I'm beautiful? Does he say that to every girl? I hope he doesn't notice my tomato red cheeks. "Hello? Sadie?" I heard Louis ask breaking me out of my thoughts. "Yes?" I say quietly I clear my throat "Yes?"

"Are you ok love?" Louis asks me. "Yes ya umm..fine." I say.

"This Is Niall." Louis says. "Hello..Sadie?" He says his deep Irish accent echoing in my mind. "Ya... Sadie." I manage to say. "Nice to meet you" he smiles. My heart flutters and I blush.

"Louis?" Niall turns to face the skinny little British boy sitting across from me. "Ya Nialler?" Louis looks up from his phone. "The lads all went home,Zayn said he needed beauty sleep and we only have one car.."

"Why didn't you go with them?" Louis asked "I was worried about you." Niall looks down embarrassed.

"Aww Nialler has a heart.." Louis pitches Niall's cheek. "my little Niall my baby!!" Louis fake cries. niall chuckles and rolls his eyes at Louis. "what's going on??" I hear a faint voice. Louis stops fake crying and looks up. "I asked a question." I hear the familiar voice. we all look towards Jaki. She's trying to sit up.

"JJ??"

(A/N: Oh my gosh guys....she is awake!!! what is going to happen??? I don't even know if I can handle the suspense ahhhhhh!! love ya'll!!

~~~LaynaBear~~~;))

Jaki's p.o.v.

I can feel the people around me but I can't hear them. I can feel myself in my body but I can't move. I know I'm in a room but I don't know where. I can't see anything. I'm trying so hard to open my eyes.

A bright light shines into my face. I opened my eyes. I could hear the voices around me. Faint laughs and chuckles. and then crying....really really loud crying. " my little nailler has a heart!" A light British accent cries. I manage to talk though I was in so much pain.

"What's going on?" I whispered suddenly everything goes silent. I can feel everyone breathing. nobody answered my question. I pushed myself up on my hands and looked around the room. I was in a hospital. I looked around the room and noticed two strangely familiar boys and my best friend Sadie. "I asked a question" I said I little bit louder.

Sadie looked at me shocked. tears began to fill her eyes. "JJ?" she asked.

"What the fuck is going on!" I yell. Sadie jumps and hurries out of the room. The two boys look at me. the one with the light brown hair gets up and walks towards me. "I'm Louis..tomlinson." he says I nod signalling him to go on. "your boyfriend...umm....ex boyfriend." he started. "he umm....he hurt you.." he says. Carter he hurt me. I remember it all know. He tried to kiss me and I kicked him. He hurt me.

"What are you doing here." I asked the boy. "I found you" he whispered.

He saved me. This boy Louis Tomlinson...Louis Tomlinson...i suddenly remembered one direction....Louis Tomlinson. oh my god! "Thank you" I whispered

"For what?" I giggled he is clueless. "Saving me." I said. he turned red "oh...uh...ya.....saving you..right." he mumbled stuffing his hands in his pockets.

"So your the famous Louis Tomlinson?" I asked. "Err...ya" he said nervously. "Well Louis I'm Jaki! it's so nice to meet you!"

Louis p.o.v.

I don't understand how is she so happy? she just got beaten senseless and picked up by a random stranger who brought her to the hospital and just got out of a coma. "I feel strange...." she said "how long have I been here?" I knitted my eyebrows together. "Almost a day" I said.

"Wow" she breathed. "that long? OH WELL!" she yelled causing me to jump. I looked over at her and studied her face...she really is beautiful. she looked at me and flashed me a smile and began to rip the needles and tubes from her arms I looked at her in shock and stepped back. She began to get up but instantly fell forward. I lunged at her and caught her just before she fell one to the hard floor. I stood there in silence holding her until she patted me on the shoulder. "Well thank you mate!" she said loudly as she jumped up from my grasp. "Guess I'm a little shaken up!" she said forcing a smile. I nodded. "I......need the toilet!" she yelled causing me to laugh as she ran towards the bathroom. Niall sat there smiling. "she seems nice" he said. I nodded in agreement. he smiled and winked. "I'm going to go look for Sadie" he said walking out of the room.

I heard the toilet flush and the shower start up. and that's when I heard it...like angels in heaven..the birds in the trees...it was beautiful...

Jaki's p.o.v.

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