Surprise?! (Louis Tomlinson F...

By 4ever_directioner_34

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This is a Louis Tomlinson fanfic. People say I'm the luckiest girl on earth... Well I totally agree! I'm not... More

Chapter 1 - The Story
Chapter 2 - The Approval
Chapter 3 - The Dinner Catastrophe
Chapter 4 - This is Trouble
Chapter 5 - The Silent Treatment
Chapter 6 - Jealous Much?
Chapter 7 - Another Surprise?
Chapter 8 - A Magical Night
Chapter 9 - The Moment Of Truth
Chapter 10 - What Up With Surprises?
Chapter 11 - A Floor For 2 Please?
Chapter 12 - Zip Lock Throw the Key
Chapter 13 - I'm Gonna Miss You...
Chapter 14 - Please Stop
Chapter 15 - My Turn to Surprise You
Chapter 16 - It's More Fun In The Philippines
Chapter 17 - Mabuhay!
Chapter 18 - Here We Are!
Chapter 19 - Cheeky!
THANK YOU!!!
Chapter 20 - It's Our Vacation!
Chapter 21 - Weird?
Chapter 22 - A Little Twist
Chapter 23 - Louis's Bright Idea
Chapter 24 - Niall's Time To Shine
Chapter 25 - Filipino Slang
Chapter 26 - Scattered Weirdness
Chapter 27 - Lim Family
Chapter 28 - Make A Wish
Chapter 29 - LQ? (Lovers' Quarrel?)
Chapter 29 (Part 2) - LQ? (Lover's Quarrel)
Important stuff!
Chapter 30 - Protectiveness
Chapter 31 - A Little Blackmailing Won't Hurt
Chapter 32 - The Biggest Mistake
Chapter 33 - Worried Sick
Chapter 34 - Compliments
Chapter 35 - Start Planning
Chapter 36 - Preparations and... Jealousy?
PROMO (NEW)
Chapter 37 - Family Crying Session
Chapter 38 - Walking Down The Aisle
Chapter 39 - Mr. and Mrs. Tomlinson
Chapter 40 - Hotel Room Surprise
Chapter 41 - The Unexpected
Chapter 42 - Busted
Chapter 43 - Fight
Chapter 44 - Should I?
Chapter 45 - Where is this gonna leave us?
Chapter 46 - Deal?
Chapter 47 - Karma's a B****
Chapter 48 - Broken
Chapter 49 - All Messed Up
OPEN!!!!
Chapter 50 - I'm Home
Chapter 51 - The Papers
Chapter 52 - Labor
Chapter 54 - End and Beginning
RANT
EPILOGUE
NEW FANFIC!!!!
SEQUEL MAYBE???
FINAL RESULT!!!!
News!!

Chapter 53 - Too Many Problems

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By 4ever_directioner_34

Chapter 53

Jillian's POV

I've been living with Liam and Dani since I left Wolverhampton. It's kinda embarrassing that I'm living with Liam but I had nowhere to go. Danielle and the other girls have been so supportive with my decision, saying that I did the right thing but Liam and the other lads were talking me out my decision. 

Everyday, everyone will come to the flat and debate on what is best. Trust me, it gets annoying sometimes but I'm thankful that I have them behind me. 

Today, it was so quiet at the flat. Liam and Dani went out to shop for groceries. Usually everyone comes at around 10:00am. It's already 12:30pm and there was still no sign of my cheer squad. 

At around 1:30, there was a knock on the door. Finally! I was starting to feel bored. 

I was surprised to see my parents. What are they doing here?

"Mom? Dad?" I asked.

"Hello sweetie!" Dad greeted me and just let themselves in. What is going on?

"Not to be rude guys but... What are you guys doing here?" I said as I closed the door, making sure that I locked it. 

"Sit down sweetheart." Mom said, sitting down on the opposite side of the couch. 

"What's going on? Did something happen?" 

"No sweetie, everything's fine. We just need to talk to you." Mom answered, looking at Dad like she was giving him permission to speak.

"Honey, Your brother has been keeping us updated on both you and your husba-"

"Ex... ex-husband." I corrected. Man that was hard to do! Just thinking about Louis being my ex was making me wanna barf.

"Louis... Geoff, just use his name." Mom said. 

"Don't you dare mention his name!" I mentally shouted.

"Ok... Liam has been keeping us updated on both of you. And by the things that I heard, both of you have been miserable." Tears have started forming on my eyes.

"I don't care if he's miserable!" Anger is starting to fill me in. 

"Honey, we know it's hard but are you really sure about the divorce? I mean I understand how hard it was but... Are you really sure?" My mom asked, fidgeting with 

"Why are you making me question my decision mom?" I'm curious. The day that I came home, they were telling me that I was doing the right thing. 

"Honey, Love... Love is an endless act of forgiveness, it never ends. You have to learn how to forgive because you'll do it over, and over, and over again." Mom told me. 

Why is she telling me this now?

"Why are you telling me this mom? I thought you supported me in my decision?"

"Yeah... but... We want you to be happy. And we saw how happy you were when you were with Louis. He was your everything. We can see how you two look at each other."

"i don't understand... Mom..."

"I experienced what you're experiencing right now." Mom said, cutting me off. Her gaze turned to Dad.

"What? Dad..." I asked, my eyes landing on my Dad but he can't look me in the eyes.

"What?" I heard from behind me. 

Liam's home.

"Liam, sweetie. You're home." Mom said, wiping the tears that started forming.

"What do you mean that you experienced the same? Dad... don't tell me..."

"I'm so sorry. It was 3 years ago when your Mom visited you both on tour." Range is now filling in in both Liam and I.

"Dad... Dad how could you?!" 

"I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry! Both of you, I'm so sorry!" Dad was now on his knees, begging for our forgiveness.

"Mom, how could you keep this away from us?" 

"I'm sorry sweetheart. I didn't have the strength." 

"i can't.. I can't right now..." and Liam was out the door. I took mom with me to the guest room and left Dad by the couch. 

"Dad, wait here." I can't even look at him in the eye.

"Is this why your pulling me out of my decision?"

"Darling, if you know how to forgive and forget, your marriage will be a huge success."

"But Mom, how can you live your life knowing that your husband cheated on you?"

"I know it's hard sweetie but... I really love your father. He's my everything. It was easy to forgive if you think about all the good memories and not the bad ones. If I can do it, you can too." 

"You really think I can?" I asked.

"I don't think so, I know so." 

"Thanks mom, I know what I should do now."

I made up my mind, no need to think it over,

If I'm wrong, I am right,

No need to look no further. 

We went out to talk to Dad.

"Dad?" I asked. He looked up and saw me and mom walking towards him.

"I forgive you." Dad automatically walked towards me and wrapped me in a tight hug. 

"Thank you honey. Thank you so much!" 

Our father-daughter moment was cut short by my phone buzzing, signalling a message. 

From : LouBear <3

Little Tommo is on the way. Hope we can work things out. 

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TWIST!!!!!

I would like to thank the TV Show "The Legal Wife" for the ideas! HAHAHA!!!

I feel like this story will only have 2-3 chapters left and I can't seem to find time to write it... I'm say sorry for the nth time! I'm so sorry! 

Sorry for the "LONG" wait. 

Hopia liked it! HAHAH!!! << this was supposed to be a joke. LOL!

(For those who don't know, Hopia is a popular Chinese/Indonesian bean-filled pastry.) 

VOTE AND COMMENT!!!!!

Comments are surely needed. Tell me your opinion on this chappy and suggest some scenarios that I can use to continue this story.

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