Bin Roye Aansu

By craziest24

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Kya kabhi bhi jaan payega Omkara apni gauri ka haal-e-dil?!!... Inspired by the urdu novel Bin Roye Aansu by... More

Characters
Part 01
Part 02
Part 03
Part 04
Part 06
Part 07
PROMO
Part 08(SPECIAL)
Part 09
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
PROMO
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Trailer..
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34 (The Confession)
Part 35
part 36
Part 37 (The new RiKara)
Part 38
Part 39
Part 40
Last Chapter

Part 05

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Next day;

Morning time;

G(to herself): Gauri aaj himmat dhika or yeh baat bol hi de dadi se k tuh Omkara se bepanah muhabbat krti hai.... Akhir dadi hi to hen jo tere rishte ki baat ko aage barhaen gi, jo humari dosti yaari ko rishtedari mae badal dengi....
Omkara ke maa baba ko humara rishta bhej kar hum dono ko aik krdengi.... Bass aaj ke aaj hi dadi se baat krti hun....

And she moved into dadi's room where she found Ishana sitting with dadi...

I: Arey gauri aa na baith humare saath.... Dekho na dadi kitne pyaare kisse suna rahi hen humare bachpan k... Mujhe toh bohot maza aarha hai... Tu bhi aa,idhar apni jiji ke saath baith...

She shifted a bit making place for gauri to sit...

G: Wo... mein...

D: Yeh wo mai... kya hai?? Apni jiji aur dadi ke aage khul kar baat kar sakti hai... koi nayi faramaish hai kya tmhri?? Chlo bolo,kia baat hy?

I: Haan aur waise bhi,agar dadi nae mana kiya toh tumhari jiji hen na... Hum puri karenge aapki har farmaish ko.... Bass aap farmaish ko apne zuban par toh aik dafa la kr dekhye..

G: Jiji wo kya hy na.. wo.. Humein sirf kuch der dadi se baat krni hai...

D: Toh karo na... Koi puchne ki baat hui bhala... Bolo kya hua bache??

G: Aise nhi... Akele mein...

D: Haan toh akele mae hi toh hai... Tm,mein aur Ishana hi hen is kamre mae.. Isse zyada akela kya chahiye??

Ishana understood what she meant so got up and began moving out.... Dadi too got everything clear and stopped Ishana...

D: Ek sec, matlab tumhari baat Ishana ke samne bhi nahi ho sakti hai... Aisi kaun si baat hai bhala jo tum apni jiji k samne bhi nhi kar skti ho?? Jo bolna hai iske saamne bolo... Jiji hen tmhri..

G: Par dadi...

I (smiling): Koi baat nhi dadi... Gauri mujhse abhi abhi toh mili hai. Itni comfortable nhi hogi mere saamne baat krne ke liye... Mujhe koi problem nhi hai... Mein bahar jaa rahi hun...
Chutki tum aram sy baat krlo...

G: Sorry Jiji.. Par wo..

I (smiling): Koi baat nhi..

And she moved out of the room...

D: Yeh kya tareeka tha Gauri?? Ab batao k kya baat thi jo tum apni behn ke saamne bhi nhi kr skti thein

G: Dadi wo... aapko nhi lagta ki humari umar ho gyi hai...

D: Kya karne ki...

G: sha.. aadii... Dadi aapko nhi lagta ki ab humein shaadi kar leni chahiye...

D: Kya bol rahi ho... abhi ishana ki shaadi hui nhi hai aur tum apni shaadi ki baat kar rahi ho... Parhai likhai puri hui nahi hy abhi aur... Aik sec, kahin tumhara kisi se koi chakkar toh nhi chal raha...

G (hurriedly): Nhi dadi... aisa bilkul bhi nhi hy.
(Slowing down) Leken dadi humein kisi se beinteha muhabbat ho gyi hai... Hum unke bagair apni zindagi ka soch bhi nhi sakte hen...Wohi humari har aik saans mae basse hen.. Humari rooh puri tarah se sirf aur sirf unki hai.. Aur dadi yeh pyar bilkul sacha hai kyun k hum bachpan se unse ishq krte hen.

D: Yeh kya jhatka de rahi ho Gauri... Akhir wo kaun hy jisse tum itni zyada shiddat se chahti ho wo bhi bachpan se... Aur tumne apna haal-e-dil humein isse pehle kyu nhi bataya....

G (with shy): Omkara...

D: Yeh kya anab shanab bakke challi jaa rahi ho?? Tmhy pata bhi hai ki kitna umar ka fark hai tum dono mae... Kareeb 7 saal barA hai Omkara tmsy,aur aap ka kehna ki aapko unse ishq hai... Mai toh aaj tak isse bhai behan ka pyar manti thi...

G: Kya kabhi Omkara ny humein apni behan manna hai. Wo humesha humein apni best friend kehte hen.

D: Best friend aur girl friend mein farak hota hai Gauri... Umar to dekhti tum....

G: Par dadi muhabbat toh andhi hoti hai na.... Na umar dekhti hai na insan,sirf ho jaati hai.. Dadi humara khud par aur apne is dil par pr kbhi kaabu nhi tha.... Ab dadi hogyi hai muhabbat,kya kar sakti hun..
Aapse aaj bas ek aakhri farmaish krne aayi hun... Pls dadi Omkara k parents se mere rishte ki baat chala dijiye,pls dadi... Iske baat mai waada krti hun ki aapse zindagi mae aur kuch nhi mangun gi....

And she hugged Dadi....

D: Aisa nhi bolte bache.. Bhagwan karre ki aap humesha apni farmaisho ke saath humare paas aayen lekin... (thinking for a while)
Acha teekhe hum kl shaam ko unky ghar jakr omkara k maa baba se aap dono ke rishte ki baat ko chalate hai...

G (happily) Thank you so so so much.. U r the best Dadi..

And she hugged her again.

Tea time;

O: Arey bass bawli.. Tm toh iss qadar sajh dhaj kar aayi ho jese tmhy larky wale dekhne arhy hun..

S: Ab koi tareeke se insan bankar samne aajaye achanak se toh aisa hi lagega na...
And both hi-fied....

I: Uff..,bohot satate ho Omkara meri chutki ko.... Mt bholo k yeh tumhari khataranak saali hai..

And Gauri started coughing, dadi's eyes ball widened and....

S (shouting): Saaliiii..!! Kaun?? Kis ki?? kahan ki??

I (surprised): Itna shock kyu ho rahi hk tm Sanvi... Gauri Omkara ki saali hi hui na... uffff (smacking her head)
Mai batana hi bhul gayee....
Inse milie... yeh hai mera pehla or akhiri pyar... mere jivan saathi Omkara...

G (stammering); Aa..ap.... d.on..o na..e sh...aa..dd....i ka..r.... l.ii??

I: Tm hakla kyu rahi ho Gauri... Humne abhi tak shadi toh nhi ki hai,lekin iss mahine pura irada hy.

S: Iss mahine kaise? Abhi hi toh chacha aur chachi ko guzre hue kch din hue hen.. Abhi foran shaadi,samaj biradri mae kitni baatein hongi...

O: Shaadi mae sirf dono parivar honge bas,aur kisi ko nhi bulaenge... Sandhya maa bolkar gyi thi ki humein shaadi aik do mahine tak kr lein. Aur yeh unki aakhri khwaish samaj kar hum pura krna chahte hai...

G (in tears): Omkara aapne humein iss baare mae kuch bataya hi nhi.....

O: Mai tum ko surprise krna chahta tha... Yahi toh baat aapko batani thi.. Mgr tm ro kyu rahi ho bawli?

G (sarcastically) Nhi nhi.. Yeh to khusi k aansu hen

And she ran into her room...

I (confused): Isko aik damm kia hogya?

S: Wo wo... Uska dil toot gya na... uske paglu nae usse itni barhi baat jo chupai,toh shayad isliey ro parhi.. Wo gauri bohot jaldi ro parti hai.. Thk ho jayegi abhi....

O: Mujhe nhi pata tha k usse iss baat se itni takleef hogi... Warna pehle hi bataya diya hota maine....
Usse baat krke aata hun....

S: Nhi ap abhi usse thodi dair akele chod den... Dil par gehri chot laggi hai... Ap baad mae baat kar lijiyega...

O: Baad mae kaise Sanvi... Apni bawli ko dukh diya hai maine... Mujhe bilkul bhi andaza nhi tha ki woh itni si baat ko dil se laga legi...

S: Apke liye itti se baat hogi lekin uske liye nhi...
Wo... wo haarne par bhi us din kaise rone laggi thi..
(to Dadi) Maa intezar kr rhi hogi Dadi,mein nklti hun..

Now Sanvi also couldnt control herself and thus left for her house....

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Summary (eng translation )

The chapter starts with gauri talking to herself... she tells herself that some how she needs to gather courage and reveal to dadi everything about her love... without wasting anymore tine she goes to her room and finds her sitting and chatting with Ishana... Ishana asks her to join them while she acts wierdly... when dadi asks her what the matter is... she tells her that she wishes to speak to her about something really important... dadi asks her to go ahead... but she hesitates and says that she wishes to speak to her alone.... dadi doesnt get what she was trying to say... but ishana understood and started moving out... seeing her move out dadi too understood and asked gauri to talk whatever she wishes to in front of Ishana... Ishana very carefully handles the situation smiling and leaves the room... after she leaves gauri reveals to dadi that how much is she in love with someone since childhood.... this sgocks dadi to teh core as she had no idea of gauri loving someone... when she gets to know its none other than Omkara she opposes their relationship because of the huge age gap... Gauri who is so much in love... tells her that love is blind and taht no age bar can obstruct her from loving him... she pleads him to ask for their marriage from Omkaras parents.... and says that this would be her last wish to her....
Dadi asks her to keep demanding and not stop this way... and tells her taht she will talk about it at tea time....
Evening time...

Omkara teases gauri that she has been dressed as if people from the bridegrooms side were coming to meet her.... Sanvi joins him and both of them pull her leg... Ishana asks Omkara to stop teasing his to be saali.... and this shocks the 3 of them... and Sanvi ends up shouting on learning about it.... Ishana reveals that both of them are in love with each other.... This brings tears to gauris eyes... Omkara asks the reason behind her crying but she without revealing it runs to her room... Sanvi covers it up by sayi g that she is heart broken as her paglu her best friend hid such an important thing of his life from here... Omkara tells her that he wished to surprise her and this was the thing he was going to tell her on meeting....
Saying so Sanvi too left for her house...

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