(My stuff isn't popular yet so I wanted to do something DRAMATIC)
Two cats in the clearing were in a writhing ball of fur. I smelt blood in the air, and the two cats jumped from another. One of them was grayish blue, and was covered in scratches and bites. The other was a dark brown with lighter brown stripes, who to was covered in scratches and bites. Father stepped up and growled "What in the name of Starclan are you doing?" The two cats looked surprised at there leader. I stood at his side. "You are not showing a good model for kits Bluefur and Mouseclaw!" He yowled. The blue-ish cat spoke" I'm sorry Hawkstar. Mouseclaw threatened that since I was a queen, I should stay in the nursery or else he would claw my kits up! " Father looked at her and nodded "Its fine Bluefur. Go back to the nursery, ok? I heard your kits were up. I'll deal with Mouseclaw." Bluefur nodded" Ok Hawkstar. " and padded to the nursery. "Mouseclaw, I want to see you in my den. NOW!" continued Father. "Blazekit, follow me." he added. Mouseclaw and Hawkstar walked to a small, shadowy cave. Before following I looked around to see the other cats staring at me. I faced to the den entrance and to my Fathers side. "Mouseclaw, you must know that what you did was wrong. A queen is allowed outside even if they have gave birth. Sometimes there mate is gone out and they get fresh-kill." Started Father. Mouseclaw retorted" Her mate was there, she was not even near the fresh-kill pile, and she was talking to an elder! " Father replied immediately "So? Queens talk to elders to have advice on how to raise young. And no one is to tell a threat like you did. Who started the attack?" Mouseclaw hesitated, then said "I did. She didn't budge and said I was a mouse-brain, and that was why I had my name. I nipped her and she swiped at me. It went from there. Ok? " Mouseclaw left the den before Hawkstar responded. "Does this happen all the time?" I asked. " No" Replied Father