Hello all! I have just re-read this entire story and found out it's extremely rushed, and horrible at some parts.. Not something I'm really proud of, therefore I'm doing a huge job, re-writing it, adding, and removing parts to make it more readable and better. I will rewrite some of the chapters and then reposting it as a new story! Hopefully I will continue this story after that! :)
Any suggestions? All help is appreciated! Someone that want's to edit please tell me!
- Carohd