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The Code of the Alpha

8/10 Love the premise. The plot is good but has holes. The storyline is rocky and needs more definition. The grammar and spelling are not horrid but need an edit. It is the characters that make all these faults fade into the background, they outshine the errors. They have a full flavor and well-roundedness to them, granted some of the lesser characters need a polish and to have their reasoning filled in, yet they still shine so bright.

ENJOY!!!

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