@NoraRuthWest Thanks! That would mean a lot to me, and if you could give me your honest opinions of the characters I'd be even more grateful. I think you might like "Mind, have mercy". Sulfur & Tealights is a lot of fluff right now and a slow burn romance. I proofread and edit each chapter multiple times before publishing, but it really is a rough draft in its purest form.
I just have one recommendation for Bonniebank right now: the second chapter is crazy long. My attention span is much longer than an asdf movie animation, but I find myself losing focus and skipping parts trying to get as far as I can. The screen also has to load several times before I reach the end of the chapter just holding the "down" button. A little bit shorter than the first chapter would probably be a good length, and you would have a lot of material saved up for later so you could keep a consistent update schedule even during a really busy week.
