MelancholicYūrei

No problem, I truly do like the story so it was the least I could do to follow you. It actually made me inspired to start my own CPN but I'm clearly too over the place XD. 
            
            Don't be a stranger if you want to talk! 

@captiansam Thank you ^^ I hope that as well too 

@captiansam  Well don't stop and I hope you keep improving~ 

@captiansam Thank you so much. It means a lot to me, and I really did put a load of effort within the story.

 Your welcome~
            It's a nice change of pace form what I usually read. The flow of writing is nice and I'm interested to see where it will go. 
            Maybe just maybe paragraph space? I know you off centre the text but it's just more easy and appealing to read with spaces as well. But that's just an opinion. 
            Have a good >undetermined time period<   ^_^
            

Thanks :) that's how I was when I stumbled upon it a year ago, accidently if I say. Hope you enjoy reading it.
            
            Happy Readings. 
            
            Bo

@bojustwriting That's the term of the week. Been learning about cell novels, they seem like fun if I could find a good hook. Your story is coherent and interesting and I find that astounding from such little number of words. 

that's a cellphone novel, it's popular in Japan :)

@Fuyutsuki_Kaori  Same here! The slump can only exist for so long, it's a state of mind not a personality trait. Continue your writing journey~ 

@SayakoYurei you're welcome. maybe I should also set  few goals for myself. been in a slump as of late. well good luck to the both of us.

@Fuyutsuki_Kaori Also thank you so very much for the comments! There endearing and actually show your interested and that is amazing! I'll try to reply to them when I can. (One of the goals I set for myself as a new age amateur writer~)

Your welcome. Its okay just not the genre I usually read for a story. So I won't read all of it. But I did like the writing. 

Hello, thanks for the offer but it's not necessary. Ciao~