SeanScruffy

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Nobody is going to kill your darlings for you.
          
          Yesterday, I had a bad feeling: one of my cornerstone chapters of Guardium was boring, as in, I would put it down as a reader and never touch the book again were I subjected to it.
          
          So, what do you do?
          Easy. And not so easy. You kill it.
          
          You kill it, and you give your story the clarity it needs. I can't tell you how to write your story, but if you find yourself yawning through your climax you might have a problem.

SeanScruffy

Hey, hope you all had a great holiday weekend! Starting tomorrow, be sure to catch the start of Part 2 of Illian's journey through Guardium! Speaking of, how do we feel about him, as a character?
          
          Also, be sure to hit me up with any r4r requests!