Here's the review the published author gave me for Milo and Maisie! I'm confident, y'all!
"Hey, Victoria! I read a portion of Milo and Maisie because it was already backed up on my other reading, and... Surprise! It is much better than I imagined it would be. Good sentence structure, plot development, and conversation flow, which is hard to do—action, always action. Patting the cat on the nose was good, for example. Grammar was good; most importantly, you wrote about what you know. We will consider publishing it on Kindle, but it's very good. In realizing that very good still needs work, you might be able to make a career of this."