@OrionColors Just a reminder to not be an asshole. You have no idea what's going on in the author's life and saying something like this definitely isn't going to encourage them to update or do anything for you.
Hey I love your book Unchained. I think it's amazing despite it having a lot of mistakes and would love it if you let me edit it for you to make it greater than it already is.
Just remembering how much Unchained got my emotions going- don’t want to spoil anything but that book ripped my heart out so many different times like no other has been able to, love love love your writing, x.