Dyn_Arxon

Hello, readers!
          	
          	Across my platforms, I'm only posting this here. I've a question, should I pursue a beta reader? I know some of my chapters hold some typos and can read a little strange, particularly a scene concerning a floo, and Madams Longbottom and Bones in Unexpected Gifts comes to mind. However, I believe that scenes such as that are found humorous by you, my audience.
          	
          	So, if you'd like, please comment and share your opinions on this topic. I'd love to read all of your thoughts below.
          	
          	Thank you,
          	DynArxon

ikumi35353

In your book unexpected you keep calling the Queen Elizabeth, her highness, when it should be her majesty….
          
          when greeting the Queen, you referred to her as "Your Majesty" or "Ma'am" — but not "Your Royal Highness."
          
          "Your Royal Highness" was actually used to address any other member of the Royal Family, apart from the Queen herself.  
          
          Just letting you know

ikumi35353

Am glad I was able to help a little, also use google, if you can’t get to the library,  and don’t fully trust Wikipedia
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ikumi35353

To answer your question,  if he is equivalent or greater in power and just to be on the safe he should still call her majesty especially if he is a guest in her kingdom, however if she was in the magical she might or would have to bow to him, since he has the great power in both world, but like  I said previously when ever he is having a meeting her in the muggle world, is better to just go by protocol, we don’t want a war now do we
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Dyn_Arxon

@ikumi35353 As an American, who doesn't know much about the peerage and proper titles and had to learn as I wrote my story, thank you. Question though, with the inclusion of the lines explaining that Harry is equivalent or greater power in the magical world, would such an address still be proper?
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Dyn_Arxon

Hello, readers!
          
          Across my platforms, I'm only posting this here. I've a question, should I pursue a beta reader? I know some of my chapters hold some typos and can read a little strange, particularly a scene concerning a floo, and Madams Longbottom and Bones in Unexpected Gifts comes to mind. However, I believe that scenes such as that are found humorous by you, my audience.
          
          So, if you'd like, please comment and share your opinions on this topic. I'd love to read all of your thoughts below.
          
          Thank you,
          DynArxon

Hailey083749

Is unexpected gifts finished?

Hailey083749

@Dyn_Arxon absolutely, continue on doing fab work hun xo
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Dyn_Arxon

@Hailey083749 Thanks, I'm glad readers enjoy my work. Every vote and comment inspire me to write more.
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Hailey083749

Thats cool, it was a fantastic book though xo
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