Amara_au
Omg I got addicted
GiveMeThatBread
ydaninadd6a7y
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KaylaCrawley1
Typo right after last edit
Buring should be burning
KaylaCrawley1
Final destination part 3 edit
Envy attempted to take *it the position
Don’t need the word it
KaylaCrawley1
Another in final destination part 2:
Teru couldn’t even finish exhaling before Lucas *was at the bottom of the staircase
KaylaCrawley1
Near beginning of final destination part 2 there is a sentence that should start with “Kieran rubbed *his back”
I’ll start using asterisks to note missing words.
KaylaCrawley1
Same chapter just an extra word in a sentence “Blaise cradled him at in one of the chairs” don’t need the word at.
KaylaCrawley1
In final destination part one there’s a sentence that is missing the word I. “I guess I have become a fool”
KaylaCrawley1
I’m a librarian so editing stuff must be in my blood lol. Cuz I read frequently or try too anyways. I’ve been crocheting more recently though, but I always keep up with this book.
KaylaCrawley1
I can do that!! I might reread some earlier chapters and see if I can find any errors. Typos are the easiest to spot, unneeded punctuation I am not as good at spotting, but can spot fragmented sentences pretty well too.
GiveMeThatBread
@KaylaCrawley1 you should just be my grammar editor at this point for Book 2 and onward hahaha. since I don't have one for it (past editor for published version book 1 is too busy now!)
Noxcatulus
I could really see this story be a TV show
KaylaCrawley1
In leaving on a jet plane chapter in middle sentence should read: “They have a soft spot for the extinct gender.” Just missing the word spot.