Getsuga itself

@Hollow_wrld6969 prologue on Devil May Cry and the connection with Kazuto/Kirito
            
            Canon Kazuto having hacked a government site discovers that it is adopted.
            Does this lead him to ask questions and discover he is a descendant of the Spardas?
            
            or Kazuto's grandfather, enraged at the idea of him abandoning kendo, reveals to him that he is not really a Kirigaya.
            
            other event?
            
            Does Kazuto meet a girl before Aincrad?
            
            is Kayaba linked/infeoded to Devil May Cry Demons or has no links. or another character Sugou, Poh,....
            
            
            Kirito’s harem: how many girls and which ones Rosalia? Yuna? Quinella? 
            
            Aincrad: how many chapters/arcs?
            slow pacing/development, take your time to set and develop your story two years is a long time.
            Build the lives of the characters, theirs interactions day after day (personally it’s the main black holes of Sao stories for me, so much blanks copies, Sao originals stories are rares).
            
            slow romance
            
            work your format/grammar 
            
            hoping it’s enough hepful ^^'

@Black_Legion2024 appreciate it what do you think I could do better?

@LuxCranel00 uh it completely different on my YouTube so that would be kinda hard

than can you make your mha story appear on wattpad pls?

@LuxCranel00 I do Mha on my YouTube but  danmachi and fairy tail I'll have to re-watch them so I'll do them when I can

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@foxy_the_meme_god Y

@Chriswalker2001 nah it fine I high school so I get it

@son_born_in_the_dark Sadly, I will not make another chapter until Friday because of exams for college. Also, I have the symtoms of COVID and they got worse, but the good news is that I am feeling better and my body doesn't ache anymore.

@Chriswalker2001 cool