I'm so snarky when I read other people's writing, and then I get annoyed at myself for being such a critic. Every time I read something I'm complaining about the pacing and wording in my head
Yikes... Looking back on this account I would literally delete so much of this shit. If not for its #1 rating I'd probably delete the oneshot book entirely. I'd love to keep writing but I think I'm gonna move on to different stuff.