Hakuna Matata!

This was a awesome book like I want more of it but like I kind of like how it ended 

I thought there was a book 2?
          

Can we get like an extras chapter of maybe a book too the book had lots of plot holes and a very rushed ending I would've been okay with him dying later in the story or if his death was not as rushed as it was and don't even get me started on the plot holes there are way to many of them to began with another thing is the incest you should've made it so the other brothers were just best friends and left Jaylyn out or didn't notice him.
          
          Something I was okay with was Jaylyn having a friend who cared about him and Ashton warming up to him in that one scene but that's about it. Everything else is plot holes and rushed so in short the story needs to be re-written to make sense or at least edited because some of it was just completely random.

Bro if you leave the story like this I’m gonna die! I need something else from this! you don’t even understand how this shit just.. brah! That’s it. I’m not even gonna finish the sentence. It’s a cliffhanger! Just like this damn book!

I wanted to ask if I could rewrite your book for you. Being an author isn't easy and the story was full of loopholes with a disappointing ending sooo
          Can I give it a try ❤️

Is the book finished? 

your book is shitty 

Dear Author, thanks for the wondering read. I was just wondering if there is a continuation of the story,  I really want to know what happened after. 
          

Does it really end like that or your just editing some part of it? Can you pls continue the story like what happen to his brothers? His parent? Will they ever know his condition? And many more question that should be answer..

Worst book ever like omg