GoodRy2

Hello! Good evening/day. I'm a newbie writer promoting my story 'Seeking Hearts'. I badly need critiques and I hope you would check it out. If you have some free time. Thank you so much and Godbless!
          
          "You know sometimes there are things that we are really unsure of. Natatakot ako Bliss. Takot akong mali ako at tama ang mga sinasabi ng boses sa utak ko." 
          
          https://my.w.tt/R13WU7nKi2

GoodRy2

@GoodRy2 thank you so much!
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RonieXMR

@GoodRy2 Hello. Good day! I really appreciate that you reach out to let me know about your request. I am glad to read your story and provide insights, however, due to my current work schedule and commitments, I'm afraid that I may not be able to read your story atm. (Currently, I am one of the judges of an ongoing writing contest here in WP.)
            Though, if given that I have time to spare, I'll give your story a go. Still, have a blessed holiday! *heart emoticon*
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