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Plzzz read my book 

@TraceeFord 
          You are very welcome. Going to check out The Fine Line soon!!! :)

@TyraMecale 
          I appreciate the input and I am starving for constructive criticism lol. I have had a rather hard couple of weeks and started a new job also, so my updates are sporadic at best. The ending of chapter seven isn't too horrid, so you can finish it lol. Chapter eight is mostly informative with some devilish action ;) Going to try and upload that very soon. Glad you like it so far and I'm always on board for editing tips. :)
          Thanks again!

@_LittleLeeLee_  So i eventually decided to take time out of my rather not busy at all day where i usually spend it drinking chai vanilla tea and reading up and coming books where i can do what i do best... Promote criticize and make books more popular. So i started reading your book and i hyave a little problem... I only read books that are written in the first person... fortunatly yours was... Smiles all around... I like your book, i like the upbeat trance of pure torture because the reader whants to know more and you not giving that to them... thats a good thing and a  bad thing at the exact same time. I want to know more but im scared to finish the last two pages in Chapter 7 because i dont know what you are going to do next.. so basically well done keep it going but remeber to get to the point.. your wrighting is still evolving and its amazing soon it will be fantastic!! If you would like any editting help im here

@fl0wersniffinwh0re 
          Well said darling. 

@MyWrites 
          Aww, your welcome. I'm sure it'll be great. If you like Fantasy, check out my story All Fall Down. ;) 

omg! thanjs for following and adding The Paining to your reading list! I hooe you like it XD

@sabb24 
          You're very welcome Hun! Lux is great so far and I can't wait for more!!! :)
          I do hope you'll take a look at my story, All Fall Down. I am always up for new readers! <3

Thank you so much for following me and adding Lux to your reading list! :)