USS_Oregon_BB-3

Wattpad's still being difficult with chapter arrangement, and the ABL Remastered story is already suffering. This time I decided to put my foot down early and simply cut and paste new chapters while deleting the old ones. It'll tank my read count and sadly delete your comments, but fortunately only chapters 4 and 5 were being problematic. #4 is republished, but sadly I lost part of the second half of #5 in the process. This does provide an excuse to clean that section up some, but I still have to go through the chore of rewriting that part again. Won't be back up for some time, but don't worry too much. 
          	
          	Chapter 6 WAS in the works, but I think I'll have to perform my rough drafts somewhere other than Wattpad, since I'm starting to think draft chapters left for too long might be part of the problem.

USS_Oregon_BB-3

@gg012108 I've been having trouble ever since my original ABL story. Multiple chapters in the early-middle part of the book are completely out of order. Back then I didn't want to mess with them, but this time I took the chance. 
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gg012108

@USS_Oregon_BB-3 man I didn’t know that you were having a rough time on the book. Well good luck sir! Ad Victoriam! 
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USS_Oregon_BB-3

Wattpad's still being difficult with chapter arrangement, and the ABL Remastered story is already suffering. This time I decided to put my foot down early and simply cut and paste new chapters while deleting the old ones. It'll tank my read count and sadly delete your comments, but fortunately only chapters 4 and 5 were being problematic. #4 is republished, but sadly I lost part of the second half of #5 in the process. This does provide an excuse to clean that section up some, but I still have to go through the chore of rewriting that part again. Won't be back up for some time, but don't worry too much. 
          
          Chapter 6 WAS in the works, but I think I'll have to perform my rough drafts somewhere other than Wattpad, since I'm starting to think draft chapters left for too long might be part of the problem.

USS_Oregon_BB-3

@gg012108 I've been having trouble ever since my original ABL story. Multiple chapters in the early-middle part of the book are completely out of order. Back then I didn't want to mess with them, but this time I took the chance. 
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gg012108

@USS_Oregon_BB-3 man I didn’t know that you were having a rough time on the book. Well good luck sir! Ad Victoriam! 
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GrandRiderZohar

Man you posted this on holy week
          
          
          
          nice

GrandRiderZohar

@USS_Oregon_BB-3 my guy I'm a filipino, marching miles barefoot to enact seven churches visitation (visita iglesia) started a few hours ago
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USS_Oregon_BB-3

@GrandRiderZohar A fellow Holy Week observer I see
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USS_Oregon_BB-3

This is primarily a bit of decision-making for future me but I'd rather ask this now while I'm thinking about it. 
          
          You know how the description of ABL Remastered mentions an alternate storyline and ending? Well, in general it will be much darker and grimmer than the main story. This will be a kind of what-if-this-specific-scenario-happened situation. 
          
          The problem here is that the alternate storyline will branch away from the main at a future point (still to be determined), and I am curious to know whether you'd rathe: 1)have the AS (alternate story) part of the main book in appropriately marked chapters, or 2) just make the AS its own separate book. 
          
          Either way is easy for me, but I do have a specialized book cover prepared in case you the readers prefer a separate book. Let's just say it sets the...overall mood of the story, if I say so myself. 
          
          TL;DR: Integrated or separated alternate storyline? 

XScarWolfX

It would make sense for it to be separated, it would be a bit easier to understand the different storylines if they’re not in the same book. 
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USS_Oregon_BB-3

Remember in the original Bulldog's Legacy that a portion of the chapters are out of order? Well, THAT PROBLEM IS STILL HERE
          
          I just want to reliably reorder my book chapters WITHOUT PLAYING MAJONG SCRAMBLE TITANS EVERY DAMN TIME
          
          Even worse, sometimes I log in to find them out of order when they were perfectly fine before!
          
          Eventually I will simply be unable to reorder book chapters. It's incredibly frustrating because I have to cut and paste content from one chapter to another just to keep the story in order. 
          
          I don't want to do that with the original ABL as it will mess up all the comments for the effected chapters. Thankfully with ABL's remake it's easier when draft chapters are involved, but still the whole problem is extremely frustrating. 

DanielCarlson915

@USS_Oregon_BB-3 I have an idea for a chapter in the what if thing for a bulldog's legacy? modern USs ore gonna go there and they Meet azur lane.
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ayyronx1

Unfortunate
            
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USS_Oregon_BB-3

I finally have a Discord server going! It took ages but with the help of XScarWolfX on Discord we finally have it in a useable state!
          
          Now you as my readers will be able to interact with me on a more personal level, no longer limited to only comments on my stories. You will be able to share ideas, opinions, and more with me. 
          
          Use this link to find and join my Discord channel. It expires in 7 days from today, so be quick! I'd love to see as many of you there as possible! 
          
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ancientgato

Chapter 3?

ancientgato

That’s dope also question what type of story will it be? Single paring harem or no pairing at all?
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USS_Oregon_BB-3

@ancientgato Great to hear! Chapter 2 will be actually released soon. Chapter 3's still in the works, but shouldn't be too long.
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ancientgato

XD can’t wait for the other chapters to actually drop in invested in the new story 
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USS_Oregon_BB-3

I used to think that the original Oregon story was more of a rough draft than anything, but as I look back at the earlier chapters I'm realizing just how good they actually are.
          
          One problem this creates is that the new remastered versions have to somehow top them, which is, to be frank, better said than done. So far the 2 remastered chapters seem worse than their OG counterparts, which shouldn't be the case as they're supposed to be the upgrade and not a downgrade.
          
          Perhaps it's just a side effect of me trying to make each chapter the absolute best it can be, when in actuality I'm only building a hurdle that's too high for myself. 
          
          TLDR: I have to create a better story while not copying the already successful original story, and I'm not making it easy for myself.

GrandRiderZohar

@USS_Oregon_BB-3 
            
            Don't worry about how good it currently is in the begining. It depends on how it progresses, story progress was the only thing your old story properly lacked
            
            So stop belittling your writing skills and always remember. We love you and care for you. And no matter how this goes well always appreciate it.
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