UrMiUne16

I deleted them because of the authors... even through it said it wasn't mine. You can read it yourself on Archive of our own bye bye

UrMiUne16

@PR3TTYFACE18 Archive of our own 
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LucilleBaguio

@PR3TTYFACE18 Hi where can I read Our Fake Omega? 
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habismain2

Can i leave a suggestion?
          
          When you finally introduced the captain (aka luffy) you should opened up the scene where luffy is exhausted after using gear 5 and kaido asking luffy "what the hell are you?!" (Chapter 1045)
          
          Then that be a good lead to luffy telling his iconic line after kaido got punch in the face (or through) and kaido in the ground asking luffy "who the hell are you?" (Chapter 1046)
          
          And then luffy telling kaido "who, me?, I'M MONKEY D. LUFFY!!, THE MAN WHO GONNA SURPASS YOU AND BECOME THE KING OF THE PIRATES!!" That be a good and interesting introduction to luffy revealing that he's the mysterious captain to the crew while luffy in gear 5, and also don't forget their reaction.

habismain2

@PR3TTYFACE18 it okay, you don't need to apologize this just a suggestion after all, i really appreciated you responding to me, thank you.
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UrMiUne16

@habismain2 like I said this is not my story I'm not allowed to switch some things up sorry.
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UrMiUne16

I deleted them because of the authors... even through it said it wasn't mine. You can read it yourself on Archive of our own bye bye

UrMiUne16

@PR3TTYFACE18 Archive of our own 
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LucilleBaguio

@PR3TTYFACE18 Hi where can I read Our Fake Omega? 
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