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might start branching out to writing in japanese

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@challenge647 Thanks for commenting. I do get what you're saying but i was trying to mimic the light novel first person narrative style in parts, (you'll get what i mean if you watch kyon's monologues from "Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya" or Touma's commentary from "To aru majutsu no index") which do often deviate from the main point in strange metaphors and weird thought processes. 
           Mmm... well the story is put in motion by the fairy so why not, and felicity (happiness) is what all the characters are looking for.

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@challenge647 Thanks for the long comment though. i appreciate that you went to the effort to point out my silly errors. I'm happy you can have expectations for my story and I'm pleased you like Detective Klue (he wont be back for quite a while but he does become rather important later on). Thanks for reading :)