WinterSleep85

Hi! I posted the final chapter of Lost In Shadows! I had SO much fun writing this story!
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1440196196-lost-in-shadows-onc-2024-chapter-seventeen

leylabreme

Hello there!
          
          I hope you don't mind me posting here, but I just started writing my first serious book with a publishing deal. My name is Leyla, and I saw some of your helpful comments on other people's books. I was wondering if you would be able to check out my book and leave your thoughts and feedback? If you'd like me to look over your stories as well, I'd love too. Thank you so much!
          
          For some context: I'm writing a fantasy book with underlying romance, taking inspiriation from the works of SJM. To keep myself accountable and hopefully meet a community of writers, I decided to upload my first draft as I write it onto Wattpad (but don't worry, it's pretty damn grammatically correct). 
          
          "A Queen's Curse" is the first book in a duology (set to be published in May 2025) about an orphan on the streets of New York who finds out she's Fae. . . and a crucial figure in a war she didn't even know was happening. I've linked the story in this post incase you wanted to check it out.
          
          Have a wonderful day! Thank you! 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/359512313-the-queen%27s-curse

leylabreme

Sure, that sounds great! I'll try and get to it between this week and the next due to finals :)
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WinterSleep85

@leylabreme I can do that! I mostly post historical, but I have an Arthurian story, Children of the Lake, and I would love some feedback for that story! It was written more traditional style, so that kind of feedback would be super helpful. Wattpad web novel style would be feedback suggestions to make it immediate and engaging. But I'm keeping the story traditional, so I would appreciate any general feedback!
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leylabreme

Hey! Yep, I'd love to look at one of your stories in exchange. I typically read fantasy, romance, or a combo of the two so those genres I'm able to give the best feedback on. As for type of feedback, I have a publisher lined up for this novel although I'm still in the process of creating my first draft, which I post here on Wattpad. Therefore, probably the traditionally published style? As for what specifically--- I'm most concerned about the story being realistic and not dull, but any other thoughts would be helpful in the long run as well. 
            
            What about you? What type of feedback would you prefer (not that I know the diffrence between the two: do you mind telling me? haha)
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susiesbooks21

Hi I'm just wondering if you would be updating the may queen anytime soon? I've read the first 2 books in the forgotten series and I'm really enjoying them. Plus the may queen I've noticed hasn't been updated since January. Can you please let us know what's happening with that book thanks

WinterSleep85

Hi! Lost In Shadows made it through to round three! I'm so happy. I feel like my life has been a nonstop crisis since November and I never thought I'd be able to even write for ONC this year. Congratulations to everyone who made it through to round three! ONC always has so many creative stories. And thank you to everyone who has taken the time to read my twisted tale! I have posted chapter thirteen and this is one of my favorite chapters!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1437204696-lost-in-shadows-onc-2024-chapter-thirteen

WinterSleep85

@marcs_writter Hi! I'm really happy that you liked Twice Cursed! I'm sorry I had to take it down. A few years ago, there was a site that was taking stories from wattpad and I felt like I had to take down some of my important stories. I am considering my options for the story right now. If I have it available again, I will definitely announce it here.

WinterSleep85

Hi! I posted a new chapter of Lost In Shadows and I can't believe what I forced myself to write at the end. I REALLY pushed myself out of my comfort zone. Maybe it's time to go back to writing less gruesome historical?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1434698647-lost-in-shadows-onc-2024-chapter-ten

marcs_writter

@WinterSleep85 hi sorry I don't want to be rude or anything I'm not sure why you took twice cursed and once cursed of your profile and I assure that this was one of my favorite books, please where can I find it or where can I buy it, please tell me, love all you write
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