Coyotteslayer53

Hey it’s me again you might remember that back during the leopard awards you judged my book well I’m writing another one it’s not ready yet but I was hoping I could have your opinion on it if you agree just tell me and I’ll put it up for you

Coyotteslayer53

Hi! I really liked your evaluation of my story  especially the first part because I try really hard to avoid cliches and put my own twist on things the only thing o disagree with is the description it definitely shouldn’t be a 5 but I think it’s at least worthy of a 2 besides that I found it completely fair and helpful

jessieg20

@Coyotteslayer53 No worries. Everyone is constantly learning and improving and you are no exception. Good luck then! :)
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Coyotteslayer53

 I didn’t know that thx I’ll try to fix it I’ve always stunk at grammar 
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jessieg20

@Coyotteslayer53 I sincerely apologise if you are displeased with the marks I've given you regarding the description. Here's my reason. Your description is indeed fair and informative, and hence I've decided to give you credit for that. However, there are various grammar and punctuation mistakes in your description, which resulted in me not being able to understand what your book is exactly about. Right now, there isn't much I can do about it but I will take your comment into consideration. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Have a good one :))
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gemma0_0styles

Hiiii lovely!
          Are you ok love?
          I'll be happy if you take a look my fan fiction (mysterious) your ideas is important for me 
          ♡

jessieg20

@gemma0_0styles Yes I'm doing well, thank you for you concern :) 
            Of course hun! I'll take a look at your book when I'm free. Will that be alright?
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Cross-Warrior

Thanks for the follow :) Hope you find some joy from my account, whether that be delving into my stories or sending me a PM. New friends are always awesome (even if I don't always reply right away <.<) If you do choose to delve into my stories, comments and votes are always welcome ;) xD

jessieg20

@Cross-Warrior Well, then you better start getting used to it because your works are mesmerizing! Of course I'll be my pleasure to offer my feedback as well, maybe after I get through your books HAHA. Up till now, I'm really enjoying it so you can be at ease. And no worries, your first draft is unique and brilliant in its own way! :))
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Cross-Warrior

@jessieg20 Wow.  I'm not used to that being the one people read, but I'm glad you like it :) That's an old draft, but I will rewrite it eventually, so always nice to get feedback for that rewrite!  I really hope you enjoy, though I apologize for any of the first draft stuff that is very obviously first draft U^.^
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jessieg20

@Cross-Warrior Your welcome! :) Thank you for taking your time to type this little message. Just started on Never Too Late and I'm captivated! Will probably be binge reading soon enough. Comments and votes will coming right up as well so look out for that! XD
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erincasey09

Thank you for the follow! 

jessieg20

@erincasey09 Keep up the good work! :))
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erincasey09

@erincasey09 Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me :-)
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jessieg20

@erincasey09 It's my pleasure! Am reading Tears of Avalon now and I'm captivated! Honestly, huge fan of Sage :))
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dogloverishere

Hey ❣

dogloverishere

@jessieg20 thank you for following me. And no probs. ❣
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