lizoliver0305

I'm sorry it's taken so long to publish this chapter, but my day job has been too demanding. Hopefully, I'll be able to continue with new updates once a week from now on. Thank you for reading.

Geoffroes

Gday Liz, I hope all is well? I’ve settled back in well here in Rainbow. Busy, healthy, active and enjoying owning things again! I’ve uploaded Spike under SCLockwood if u r curious, or know anyone interested. Say hello to the fam!

lizoliver0305

Hi Geoff, glad to hear from you, and that all is well in Rainbow. We've just returned from our trip around some of the Cycladic Islands. We had a great time, but it's good to get home and now we can settle in for the Winter!
            I just read the 1st ch of Spike and wow, what a difference. The Active as opposed to Passive voice has really made it sparkle and picked up the pace tremendously. Well done.
            Just a hint, on Wattpad it's a good idea to reply to comments, even if only a thank you. It engages the reader and boosts your ranking in the genre. Also I skimmed the second chapter, no time to read it just now, and suggest you cut it into two chapters for Wattpad. This increases your read count which also gives you a better rank. You can call it 2a and 2b if you like and post them the same day or one day apart. Gotta go now, say hello to Rainbow for me!
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