mysterio_2000

Hey, so I started something? 
          	
          	In case people don't recognize me, I'm ally, the writer of Girl Next Door. 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/341811131

MapleMuse

Hii Ally
          Just finished reading the girl next door and I have to say I love it. Alk those plot twists ,the story and the dialogues,they were superb. The book wasdo addictive that I finished it within 3 days ! Keep it up <3<3<3

Kriti251006

Why does it happen with me? I once read a Harry Potter Dramione fanfiction, A Turn For The Better, good book. The sequel Facing The Maze was not updated since 2016.. so it was discontinued. I loved the book, but I didn't like the fact that it was discontinued. Then, I read a book called Player next Door and its sequel Play no More. Great books, totally great, but the main revelation was yet to be done, which in this case was showing who the blackmailer was. The author was writing a third book, where she would reveal it, but now, seems like she's discontinued it, Natalie was her name if I remember correctly. She last posted on instagram two days before she updated her third book, but that was about a year ago. She wasn't active on Instagram, not even on Wattpad. So, I don't know what happened to her but... Her great book seems to be discontinued. And then, to stop myself from thinking a lot about the plot and how she would have ended it and the backstory of the main character's bestfriend named Austin Taylor, I switched to Girl Next Door, and started reading it. Author, great work. Great plot. Great everything, but I thought you should try rewriting it, or that I wanted to rewrite it my way, but then I needed your permission, and when I try looking around for a way to contact you, seems like even you have disappeared. I haven't read your other book but it's on chapter 24 and seems like you aren't updating anymore. I looked for you on instagram but I couldn't find your account. So, here's another dormant account, and another great story left in the middle of nowhere, and it's my third experience. Damn, how am I supposed to get over stuff like that??!!

AsleshaLeo

Hi Ally! I recently finished reading your book,"Girl next door" and it's fabulous! Like,let me be honest here...I loved the plot. I loved the language,the picture description.. emotions shown, immaculate! I did find a few parts of some chapters (especially later ones) to be a bit confusing. But then they were clear at the end. But it would've been great if it was more clear.(P.S. this is just what I felt,I might be wrong. It could just be my problem) 
          I loved the fact that it's indeed not that cliché where a bad boy meets a good girl and so on..I loved that you made it Yours! You owned it. And that's the best!  
          Not to forget,I was shocked at the end to know that you're merely 14/15. Like I'm 15 myself and I'm into writing and reading...but this is something over the top! The maturity with which the entire story is penned is remarkable! Keep going..and I love the good girl who knows when to be bad.
          Keep winning more hearts!

rccharlie96

i just finished girl next door loved it and you are extremely good at writing keep up the great work you have a great gift i look forward to seeing more of your storys and i would not be surprised if some day you become a big time book Author if you want to that is good luck with your writing have a good day and have a great future