LightskinnKay
So Ion know if you forgot about the book or doing better things than writing but it is really good and i wish would keep writing it
TeiAsiaErica
I love the story. Everything is coming together perfectly. ❤️ I just wish it wasn’t so many run-on sentences. There aren’t many periods, commas, anything ... and I get lost reading.
stephanianichole
Thank you babes!! Yeah I know ♀️, I’m just writing as it comes to mind not paying too much mind to that. I promise I will be working on punctuation for the next chapters to come for a smooth reading. Thank you for the feedback ☺️