I have been thinking about writing off and on for several years, but I never seem to get my ideas down on paper (or typed into a google doc). My buddy Aaron and I have spent many hours on the phone and on car rides making up stories and sometimes even sharing drafts with each other. We just never seem to get anything off the ground.
A few weeks ago, I was thinking about the idea I submitted today. I had written most of the framework, but needed to fill in the details of this first chapter. I have some of the second and a bit of the third written as well. I had heard great things about the community here, so I thought I would give it a shot...see what others think about the story.
I am surprised at how anxious I feel about sharing my story. I thought it would be an easy thing to do, but pushing the publish button was more difficult than I thought it would be...
I appreciate any feedback and I am working on building my reading list as well.
Thanks for taking the time to give my story a gander!
  • Edmond, Oklahoma
  • JoinedNovember 2, 2022


Story by Zack Boatman
Cascade: The Fall of the Fifth Empire by zboatman
Cascade: The Fall of the Fifth Emp...
A world, divided by magic. Four empires isolated; engineered for purposes unknown. Unaware of each other, th...
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