From AwkwardRandomCupcake;
Aline- *waves shyly* what do you think of Admins s-s-story rivals?
Admin- I'm quite proud
Aline- Not you admin everyone who's in the ask thingy
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Ella thought for a second. "It kind of confused me a bit..."
Admin smiled. "That's to be expected, you've never had an intimate relationship. Ever."
"Well no. So I'm not that experienced either," Ella admited bashfully. "But the story is nice~!"
"I can't help myself from critquing, apologies. The story could do for some more detailed work but other then that it has an interesting plot that you could twist in so many different ways. You shouldn't stop writing it, however. I found it interesting and somewhat funny." Admin nodded in approval.
"Thank you for asking~!" Ella said, doing jazz hands for whatever reason.