Meliegirl99092

ok, hear me out. 
          At the end of the book, Av decides to go against her father, to kill him and she has to fight many men of her fathers. Niall arrives to help her but seconds before her father dies he shoots aven and it hits her lung. Niall shouts AVEN and runs over to her. He catches her before she falls, he is freaking out, panicking, and aven gets his attention. she says "sorry for everything, i did this all for you, so my father wouldnt hurt you guys. tell harry i love him, ok? and louis and liam too? tell them that?"
          "No, you can tell them yourself"
          She sighs and tell him to lean down
          He does and she grabs the back of his neck, kissing him. "I love you, ni, I love both you and harry. 
          He sits there stunned for a moment before tears gather in his eyes and he kisses her, this kiss is more passionate than the first. "I love you too, av, so so much."
          She smiles faintly before slowly going limp, her eyes closing. "Av? Aven? no no no no no no, you can NOT die, open your eyes ok? just hang on for a bit longer please?
          Tears start steaming down his face, hes shaking his head. "No no no no no no"
          The rest of the guys arrive and harry sees them, he shouts NO and runs over. 
          "Aven, Aven baby please open your beautiful eyes for me" 
          She stays still, barely breathing.
          
          Thoughts??
          It stays in avens pov till she passes out then goes to nialls pov, back to when he arrives to help her then harry when they guys arrive. Make sense? I think this would be a good ending, I didnt finish tho, so just so everyones not mad at me, Aven does come out of this alive. and maybe there could be a new villian, the people who were after harry in the first book?? After the incident aven stuggles with the demons in her head, and barely eats. Niall and harry try to help her but she just stays in bed in the room shes staying in.
          Idk just an idea

Meliegirl99092

@leiaverse thanks, dont do that!!
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Himadri151

man why do i kinda like this
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