Brick Eyes

The Brickiest Brickness

Chapter 11

Smek C's POV

What have I done? I've lost her. She's gone. Forever. Mary Channnnnn~ noooooooo~~~

M: Bro shut up you're being overdramatic

Mary Channnnn I love you so much don't die on meeeeeeeeeeee~~~~~~ Also nice mind reading skills you got there, I'm sure the author will think up some more powers for you later, and then you will be the strongest person in the land. If you don't die. Mary Chan don't leave me I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~

M: no seriously

Hmmmf

After hmmmf and hmmf and hmmmmmmmmmmf I went back to the castle. But I knew, that she wouldn't be alright. I can feel when she is hurt, physically and mentally. Because the author likes to show rather than tell. When I arrived at the castle I saw that no one was there because apparently this castle's security is horrible despite the giant simp army that serves as a guard.

S: Mary, where are your parents?

M: Pfff does it look like I care? I'm a poorly written protagonist, they're probably dead by now to give me some backstory sympathy... Aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

I fell to the floor in pain realizing that the author really likes making people fall to the floor in pain for some reason. Anyway I was in big pain and much hurt. Such ouch.

S: Mary Channnnnn! What happened!!!!! Please say something aaakjjlsdjfdlgkhfjkhj *more dramatic monologue here*

No answer... what had that evilly evil Evil done to her?!?!?!?!?!?! I had just realized that I had lost. I had lost the fight. She was gone. He won. And I lost. And I lost. And lost I had. And I had undergone the action of loss. And I II II L. I had been deprived of or ceased to have or retain (something). This is so sad.

Mary's POV

Evil said more bad words. How evil of him, even though Smek C and I have also said bad words, maybe even more than Evil has. Oh well.

The whole room was made of edgy edginess. There were edgy security cameras everywhere. Then I got big angry and stuff and my eyes turned fire nation and I tried to nation of the fire but nothing. I don't know what nothing but nothing.

Evil said evilly, "aha your eyes changed color"

"yeah you don't say i'm protagonist-chan of course my eyes change color"

Then these two menacing guys came in the edgy room and put a bracelet on my wrist because the writer of this parody was too lazy to copy paste everything and make it sound interesting. I tried to pull the bracelet off but it was no use. Edginess? No not edginess. It was the one thing that kept me from using my powers... Quartz stone. You will never get any elaboration on why quartz specifically stops the Avat- ahem, elemental princess, from using her powers. Because very pro skillz big brain world building.

He knew about my weakness. And this sentence is suddenly present tense. And the rest of this paragraph will be present tense for some reason. And the worst part is, i cannot communicate with Smek C. Which means no simp army to the rescue.

I went over to the mirror I had in my room and looked at my reflection, ready to have a big saddening monologue. I then cut myself on something sharp. Very specific sharp thing, author, good job being detailed and showing rather than telling!

I fell to the ground and saw my arm was cut deep. It was bleeding bad because the author knows human anatomy (and adverbs) very goodly and thorough. And I started to feel faint. I tried to stay awake but it was no use. I fainted. Again. I've honestly lost track of how many times I've fainted so far. Somehow, my ability to remember what happens to me after I faint was still working, so the last thing I remember was Evil rushing in to check on me because he's just evil that way.

Evil's POV

"What the hecking crap balls? She's bleeding! Someone go get a healer!" I yelled. Somehow the author's worldbuilding is so built different and mysterious that everyone forgot to mention that people have healing powers and not just elements. But then again Miss Mary Sue has telepathy. Big consistent fantasy magic system you have here, author. Anyway, What the heck did she do? Was she really trying to die? I was never actually gonna hurt her. And from all the times I did, I felt really bad. Wow, redemption arc time I guess.

I think I'm simping for her. And this time I'll tell her. I picked her up and laid her in a pool of water. Then about 5 healers (give or take a few miscellaneous healer arms and legs just floating around and helping out) came in and tried to heal her. She didn't wake up until the next day...

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A/N
The bracelet is very Built Different and special and #notlikeotherbracelets. It's more of a device than something you wear to a dance. I don't know why I put this down here and not up there in the dialogue to keep up the streak of telling and not showing. I guess I'm just quirky that way.
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