Rosehip tastes the feeling of true speed

Chapter 1

I made this a long time ago,this was my second book,and when I was still getting my GuP knowledge up to speed,it had been 3 yars,so please forgive some errors here and there about GuP lore

(I've made a few changes to GuP rules to make the story possible.First,a shell can knock out a person,but only in this round.2nd,i've made it so that they will go back onto the ship after the match,rather than stay to celebrate.Then,the interdimensional portal is located in the dorm where Darjeeling,Orange pekoe and Rosehip all sleep together.)

"Rosehip!Please come back!"Darjeeling says over the radio as Rosehip rushes off to face Ooarai head on."I'm removing the speed limiter!"Rosehip yells as she removes a part from the transmission.the Crusader surges in speed,letting Rosehip go even faster."now this si more like it!"She screams as she jumps over a canal to destroy the Char B1.Then a shell hits the Crusader,knocking Rosehip out."Rosehip,are you Okay?"Orange Pekoe asks Rosehip."Rosehip?Rosehip??!"she tells Darjeeling the bad news."Hmmmmm."Darjeeling says to herself.Just then,a shell hits Darjeeling,also knocking her,Orange Pekoe and Assam out.The Panzer 4 then runs away to safety."Darjeeling,are you alright,that was a big hit."No reply comes.Just about then, a Matilda loads another shell into the gun,then there's a bright flash from the muzzle brake and a shell is sent rocketing toward the Stug 3.The shell hits the stug 3,taking it out.Then the hetzer shoots Orange pekoe's tank,also taking her out,causing her to be knocked out like Rosehip and Darjeeling.The match promptly ends as all of the St gloriana's tank are take out.There's no time for celebration though,as the 3 of them are rushed to the carrier and sent to a hospital onoard to be checked on,while Ooarai get's investigated by the match judges for using live rounds,rather than the standard issue rounds issued to them.

Ooarai comes under close scrutiny as their shells knocked out 3 people.those 3 are rushed back onto the aircraft carriers.on top of those 3,Assam was also knocked out in the match,and she joins the rest in the hospital ward.Rosehip is treated on first,and her situation stabilises.Darjeeling and orange Pekoe are sent back to their dorms as their situation isn't as critical as Rosehip's.Then,Assam is also checked on,as she was knocked against the gun breach.That night,all 4 of them are sleeping in their dorm,with some 'Get well'cards and ballonsaround them.The girls are all perfectly fine.Then at 3 'o' clock at night,there's a loud wind as darjeeling dissapears,followed by Rosehip,Orange Pekoe and Assam.The very next day,their friends all wake up to a huge surprise,seeing that Darjeeling,Assam,Rosehip and Orange Pekoe are all gone."Where are they?"Earl grey asks as she looks around at the other's reactions.Little do they know,the 4 of them have been sent to a place,where they truly taste true speed.