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A phone call
St.Turminus hospital, June 5th 2014
Time of death 10:34 pm
patient's name : Joey Marsh
Reason of death: A large tumor in the heart, slowly stoped heart from pumping blood.
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The atmosphere of the emergency room was quite fast and scary as Ronie, a skiny white boy that had to just be 17 bursted through the big white heavy doors that swooshed out of his way as he came through, Roine's normaly fluffy brown fringe now stuck to his face with sweat and his light blue eye's irritated and red from tears, the dark circles around his eyes would sudgest that it has been a long night for him. Ronie franticly shearched the corridoors of sick and dieing people shearching for his girl.
Just a few hours ago Ronie had resevied a phone call that would change his life forever, his girl friend, his first real girl friend that he really loved had left him while he slept, swiped way from him... right from under him.
Ronie stumbled upone a large sliding glass door with the numer 48 marked above, a curtain blocked his veiw of what lay on the other side, ^i'm sure the nures said room 48^ he thought to him self, a doctor soon emerged from behind the curtian and opend the glass door, the doctor looked at the younge trembling boy in pity "i'm sorry " the doctor wishperd and with that he left to tened to other dieing poeple.
Ronie steped forward into the ice cold room the smelled of death and depretion, a man sat in the corner of the room in a chair with his head held in his hands,he didn't bother to look up to see who had entered the room,
Ronie for a moement died inside, the very air he was just breathing a minte ago and been sucked from his lungs as he stared at the stiff pale body on the bed, ronie slowly made his way over to the bed, he got on his knees and looked up at joey's pale face, her hair a dark brown was tangled and dirty her small noes and plump lips were purfect, Ronie grabs her hand and pulls to up to his lips and places a soft kiss and wispers against her cold skin "i never got to say good bye" tears streamed down his face.
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so what do you think? is it ok do you like it ?
i hope you do but thankx for reading this and i hope you have a nice day/night ^3^
