Barrister Babu fanfiction awards 2022
A fanfiction award for all the anidita lovers.
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TOTAL: 89.5/100
Overall Plot - 10/10 The plot is actually very very unique, I mean I loved this, the way you associated the show and every One Shot of yours with poetry, written by you! And the words, the poems are just very very creative. Like I could just feel everything, as if it were a movie flashing in front of my eyes. And the very first OS, you covered the whole journey so well, and pointing out mistakes are very tough for me. It's just so wholesome.
Language and style - 8/10 The language is absolutely nice, but something I want you to focus on is, like being a judge, I'm judging it as a proper poetry you know, it's in Hindi, which I love, so where I had difficulty connecting was, to portray the word 'hain', you used 'h', which would be a sort of shortcut, at first it had me lost somewhere, so I would suggest you to use the whole word instead of cutting it short. And the style is absolutely good, it's good that you added required gaps between lines and poem so that it's easy to read, and maintains the interest.
Grammar - 6/10 Grammar, so I guess I've to deduct marks in this, don't hate me cuz it's for your betterment love. Like at a point, the sentence was (bondita wore a plane saree) but it's plain which is supposed to be used here. Then you used this line, he catched her' though it should've been 'caught' because there is no such word called catched. Then, what I would mention is, when a person is silent, it's supposed to be 'quiet', not 'quite'. And there was this very frequent error where you used, for ex. She didn't said anything; but whenever it's 'didn't', you ought to use 'say', it should be, she didn't say anything. There were some words misspelled which can be autocorrect so just have an editing session for the book. Sorry for elaborating it, Hope I'm clear.
Description of scenes - 8.5/10 Every part is just so well written, but try to make them a bit more descriptive, I know you are very imaginative, I can see it through the fresh plot you're writing on, try to put it into words, it would help the reader imagine a bit more elaboratively you know.
Cover - 9/10 Umm what do I even say about the cover lol, cuz I'm the one who created it 😅 (P.S: the original writer of the book (parineeta) gave the marks).
Blurb - 9.5/10 Although an OS books doesn't need any proper blurb, cuz none of the part is connected to another, but still I would suggest you to add a 2 liner to make it more attractive.
Emotional attachment - 10/10 Anirudh and Bondita, these two characters are someone I'm really attached to, be it emotionally or whatever. And this book was cherry on top, and the poems, I'm emotionally attached to them, I wanna steal your brain writer *winks*
Originality. - 10/10 Cuz it's a fanfiction so I wouldn't deduct any marks, n the plot's very much original.
Character development - 10/10 Not gonna deduct any here too. The character's well developed.
Overall enjoyment - 8.5/10 Cuz there were quite a lot of grammatical errors which needs to be edited, like as I said, never ever use the third form with did not/didn't. I'd be very glad to help you if you want me to, don't hesitate to message me. The plot's very much new to me, I enjoyed every bit of it, just so delightful, and again, bro lend me some poetic talent lol, your mind is too imaginative to think of rhyming words, according to the plot. Keep it up!
Total - 89.5/100 Another thing I'd say is, I'm really really new to this judging thing, I just pointed out what I thought it lacked, whatever I wrote is for your betterment, I hope you keep this in mind and don't hate me please, lol. Keep writing! You've got the skills.
