Tips and tricks!
Do:
-Make the Oc spend time with said loved one, and bring them closer to your Oc, make a bond.
-Give the loved one details that you could point out (blonde hair, freckles, slight hint of black in their green eyes)
-Leave one of loved ones goals unfinished, the more attached they are to complete that goal, the sadder their death is.
-Murder, arson, and sewer slide of Some of the most heart breaking deaths
-Detail is key! Give the Oc something traumatic to remember about their death, (burnt hair, gutted insides, ghostly hallow eyes, sh scars on arms, blistered skin)
-Make the Oc bedridden or depressed at their death
Don't:
-Undermine the detail
-Make the Oc be okay after one chapter.
-Make the Oc overly sad over someone they just met.
Example:
Inko hung gingerly from the noose handing from her bedrooms door frame, her eyes a calm, yet dead looking hue, she was pale, her usually green locks had looked like they had been pulled out. Green hair sat on the ground. It was hers.
Silence stood over the room. Like a think cloud of smoke, or fog? Like something pulling at the cheekbones of an already dead animal. Izuku looked at the once, happy, extra cheerful woman, hanging there.. just.. sitting there...
Izuku knew this sense all too much. The hanging. The green hair on the floor. Only he had survived.
He wanted to scream. He wanted to kill whoever made her like this. He wanted to senseless.
