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Fanfic Review: Untamed

Type Of Story: 1D

Author: Niamzies

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 29.8K

Votes: 2.1K

Comments: 683

Description: "I love you."

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"You shouldn't."

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"Why?"

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"Because I'm Untamed."

Contains: Homosexual Relationships, Strong Violence, Mild Sexual Scenes, Strong Language, Alcohol Use, Supernatural Activity {Werewolves; Mentions of Witches and Vampires}

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Suggested If: you like werewolf fics

My Review: I'll be honest, I'm usually not a fan of Niam or werewolf stories, but I actually really like the plot of this. It's not perfect, but I think it goes at a good pace and I really like the twist with Sophia. I like your chapter lengths and your grammar/spelling is pretty good, it could just use some touching up. You have some your/you're mixups and it's not "could of" or "would of" it's "could have" or "would have." Overall, the story could use some minor editing, but I'd continue!

Note to Author: I've never shipped Niam before, but now I think I actually ship it a little omf. Still don't ship Larry though, sorry ;)

Rating (1-5): 4

Other Note: I'm super sorry this took forever to review. 12th grade is a bitch, applying to colleges and getting ready to graduate and shit