Fate (Dark!Louis) (COMPLETED)

Chapter Twelve

Soooo here's a dark Louis fic for ya (:

I'M SORRY IF I COMPLETELY SUCK AT DARK LOUIS DON'T JUDGE MEH OKAY annnddd I haven't read Dark in forever so yeah xD

Louis' POV

Niall was driving, going about twenty miles per hour over the speed limit. I knew he was hurrying, driving as fast as he dared for me, but I was still frantic.

"God damnit Niall HURRY!" I growled out.

"I'M GOING I'M GOING!" He hollered at me. He was growing frustrated and I knew it was because of me, but I couldn't help it.

We went flying past a hotel, when something caught my eye. "Wait, STOP!" I shouted at him. He stopped the car, looking at me, his eyes full of confusion. "Go back to that hotel!"

He listened and turned the car around. We started driving-not as quickly-to the hotel. I could have sworn I saw something there. I wanted to see if I was right.

He stopped at the hotel, pulling into the parking lot. Before the car was even at a standstill, I jumped out and ran to a certain car. A specific car.

I checked the license plate.

And I was right.

"It's Harry's and Zayn's car!" I shouted to Niall who had followed me out of the car. His eyes widened and he looked at me.

"Are you sure?" He asked.

"POSITIVE!"

We looked at each other and then, at the exact same time, ran to the hotel doors. We ran inside and to the front desk, taking the desk clerk completely by surprise.

"Did two people named Harry Styles and Zayn Malik check into this hotel? And did they have a girl with them?" I asked breathlessly.

"I don't think so, but I'll be happy to check for you." The desk clerk said. I nodded.

"Yes, please."

The desk clerk pulled out a big book, I guess it was a book that guests would sign their name into. I looked at the book, growing desperate.

"At would time would have these people checked in?" The desk clerk asked. I looked at Niall, trying to think. He shrugged.

"Um, probably anywhere from an hour to three hours ago." I finally told the desk clerk. He nodded and began to carefully flip through his book, reading every name carefully. I held my breath.

"Sorry sir. Nobody with the names of Harry Styles and Zayn Malik have checked in." He told me. I exhaled, narrowing my eyes at the desk clerk.

"GOD DAMNIT WHY DID YOU WASTE MY TIME THEN?!" I blew up, grabbing the desk clerk by his shirt collar, practically pulling him over the desk.

"I-I'm s-sorry s-sir I-I w-was j-just t-trying t-to h-help," he stuttered, his face growing completely white.

"HELP?! GOD DAMNIT YOU'RE THE ONE WHO'S GOING TO NEED SOME HELP BY THE TIME I'M THROUGH WITH YOU!" I screamed, delivering the first blow to the man's face followed by multiple others.

"Louis! Louis! LOUIS!" Niall hollered. The third time he called my name, I looked back at him, calming down slightly, but still pissed.

"What. Do. You. Want?" I asked through clenched teeth.

"Let him go mate. It's not his fault. They must've taken her somewhere else."

"THEN WHY THE HELL IS THEIR CAR HERE?!"

"I don't know! But I promise you, we will find her!"

I looked back at the desk clerk who looked up at me with terrified eyes. He had a nose bleed and I had already given him a black eye.

"If you speak about this to anyone, I'll kill you. Understand?" I hissed in his ear.

"Y-yes," he stuttered. I smirked.

"Good."

I let the man go and he immediately began to cower under his desk. Kicking the desk for good measure, I turned back to Niall.

"Lets go."

We exited the hotel and were once again in the parking lot.

"Where do we go now?" I asked, wiping my bloodied fists onto my jeans. I'd change the jeans when I got home with Nat.

Niall looked around and began to walk to the back of the hotel. Curious, I followed him.

"What's this Niall? It's just a field."

"Yeah, but look over there." He said, pointing.

"I don't see anything."

"Look closer."

I squinted a little bit and then I saw it. The outline of trees. The beginning of a forest.

"Do you think they took her in there?" I questioned, growing angry again. When I get my hands on them...

"They might've! Lets go!" Niall exclaimed, breaking into a run. I began to run too, easily keeping up with him. It looked like the forest was a little far away, but it really took no time at all before we were running through the trees.

"Where are we going?!" I asked Niall who ran right beside me.

"I have no idea! We might find something though!"

And indeed we did. We both stopped once we came to it. It was a little building in the middle of the forest. Too small to be a cabin, but too big to be a shack.

"She's in there." I blurted out. It wasn't a question. Somehow, I knew she was in there.

We tried the front door, but it was locked. Typical. I looked over at Niall.

"Help me break this fucker down." He nodded.

We both took five giant steps back. Hopefully this would be enough to break the door down. I looked over at Niall who said at the same time as me, "On the count of three."

We both nodded.

"One."

"Two."

"THREE!"

We ran to the door, aiming at it with our shoulders. BAM! We bursted right through the door, knocking it off it's hinges. My shoulder ached like fuck, but I didn't care about that.

I just cared about one thing right now.

"NATALIE!"

We heard a scream coming from one of the rooms in the shack/cabin. I ran to the door it was coming from and threw the door open, huffing angrily.

To be met with the scene of Zayn and some other guy holding her down.

While Harry held a pocketknife to her throat.

Taking no time at all...

I lunged.

Ohhhh shit's about to go dooown! Comment and vote if you want (: